The Old Toy Box Narrative Writing Sample - Ver - 2

The Old Toy Box
Sarah and her friend, Theresa, were playing Hide and Seek. Sarah finally found Theresa hiding
in the attic. “What’s that?” said Sarah. There in the corner sat an old, wooden toy box. “Let’s
have a look inside,” Theresa suggested. As she turned the key of the box, the lid sprang open
and a tiny Fairy King appeared before their eyes.
The girls stared at each other. The Fairy King was magnificent. He was wearing
a golden crown with glistening jewels, a purple silk shirt and a pair of red and
purple wings. “Who are you?” asked the Fairy King slowly.
“W-w-w-we are very sorry,” stuttered Theresa, noticing that they were now
surrounded by grassy hills and sparkling lakes. “We just wanted to have
a look inside.” The Fairy King smiled. He could tell that the girls were
afraid. “Welcome to Fairy Land.” The girls looked around them and could
not believe their eyes. Tiny fairies fluttered past leaving trails of glitter
behind them. “It’s beautiful!” exclaimed Sarah. She held onto Theresa’s hand
tightly as she was still a little nervous.
Just then, a beautiful Fairy Queen appeared. “What are you doing, dear husband?” she asked.
The Fairy King explained that Sarah and Theresa had somehow stumbled into Fairy Land and
seemed to be lost. The Fairy Queen’s eyes shone like diamonds. She turned to the girls and said
gently, “You are most welcome. Please, come and have afternoon tea in our palace.”
It was the most wonderful afternoon tea the girls had ever had! They drank tea from golden
goblets and ate delicious lemon and raspberry cupcakes until they could eat no more. “Thank
you so much,” said Sarah. “But my mother will be wondering where we are so we really should
be going.” The Fairy King and Queen understood and took them back to the field where they
had arrived. “Do come and visit us again,” the Queen said kindly. Then, she flicked her sparkly
wand and the girls found themselves back in the dusty attic.
The girls looked at each other in amazement. They carefully closed the lid of the toy box and
turned the key. “Let’s come back tomorrow,” Theresa whispered as they walked away from the
toy box. “Yes, but let’s keep this
our little secret,” Sarah replied.
“Girls, time for dinner!” called her

mother from downstairs.
“Coming!” Sarah shouted. The

girls climbed down the ladder and
went down for their dinner. “I’m
afraid we’re not very hungry,”
Sarah said. She winked at Theresa.
The Old Toy Box
During a game of Hide and Seek, Sarah and her friend, Theresa, found themselves in Sarah’s
attic. “Look,” said Sarah. “What’s that?” There in the corner sat an old, wooden toy box. “I
wonder what’s inside?” Theresa asked. “Let’s have a look.” As she turned the rusty key of the
box, the lid sprang open, giving the girls quite a shock. A tiny Fairy King appeared before
their eyes.
The girls stared blankly at each other. The Fairy King was dressed
magnificently. He was wearing a golden crown with glistening
jewels, a purple silk shirt and a pair of red and purple wings. “Who
are you?” asked the Fairy King, pointing at the girls suspiciously.
“W-w-w-we are very sorry,” stuttered Theresa, noticing that they were
now surrounded by grassy hills and sparkling lakes. “We just wanted
to have a look inside.” The Fairy King’s face softened. He could tell
that the girls were afraid and so replied, “Welcome to Fairy Land.”
The girls looked around them and could not believe their eyes. Tiny
fairies fluttered past leaving trails of glitter behind them. “It’s beautiful!”
exclaimed Sarah, holding Theresa’s hand firmly as she touched the petal
of a rainbow-coloured flower.
Just then, a beautiful Fairy Queen appeared. “What are you doing dear
husband?” she asked. The Fairy King explained that Sarah and Theresa had somehow stumbled
into Fairy Land and seemed to be lost. The Fairy Queen, whose eyes shone like diamonds,
turned to the girls and said gently, “You are most welcome. Please, come and have afternoon
tea in our palace.”
It was the most wonderful afternoon tea the girls had ever had! They drank honey-flavoured
tea from golden goblets and ate delicious lemon and raspberry cupcakes until they could eat no
more. “Thank you so much,” said Sarah as she and Theresa finished the last sips of their tea.
“But my mother will be wondering where we are, so we really should
be going.” The Fairy King and Queen understood and escorted them
to the field in which the girls had first appeared. “Do come and
visit us again,” the Queen said kindly and, with a flick of her
wand, the girls found themselves back in the dusty attic.
The girls looked at each other in amazement. They carefully

closed the lid of the toy box and turned the key. “Let’s
come back tomorrow,” Theresa whispered as they
tiptoed away from the mystical box. “Yes, but don’t
tell anyone what we’ve found,” Sarah replied. “They
wouldn’t believe us anyway.”
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“Girls, time for dinner!” called her mother from downstairs.
“Coming!” Sarah shouted. Without saying another word, she and Theresa closed the attic door,
climbed down the ladder and went down for their dinner. “I’m afraid we’re not very hungry,”
Sarah declared and winked at her friend!
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The Old Toy Box
During a regular game of Hide and Seek, Sarah and her friend, Theresa, found themselves in
Sarah’s dusty attic. “Look,” said Sarah pointing. “What’s that?” There in the corner sat what
looked like an old, wooden toy box. “I wonder what’s inside,” Theresa declared. “Let’s have a
look.” As she eagerly turned the rusty key of the box, the lid sprang open, giving the girls quite
a shock. A tiny, majestic Fairy King appeared before their eyes.
The girls stared blankly at each other. The Fairy King was
dressed magnificently. Upon his head sat a golden crown covered
in glistening jewels and he wore a purple silk shirt and a pair
of red and purple wings. “Who are you?” asked the Fairy King,
pointing at the girls suspiciously.
“W-w-w-we are very sorry,” stuttered Theresa, noticing that they were
no longer in the attic but instead surrounded by grassy hills and
sparkling lakes. “We just wanted to have a look inside.” The Fairy
King’s face softened. He could tell that the girls were afraid and so
replied warmly, “Welcome to Fairy Land.” In disbelief, the girls looked
around them. Tiny fairies fluttered past leaving trails of glitter behind
them and colourful rainbows seemed to fill the sky. “It’s beautiful!”
exclaimed Sarah, holding Theresa’s hand firmly as she stroked the petal
of a strange, exotic flower.
In the blink of an eye, a beautiful Fairy Queen appeared, “What are

you doing, dear husband?” she asked. The Fairy King explained that Sarah and Theresa had
somehow stumbled into Fairy Land and seemed to be lost. The Fairy Queen, whose eyes shone
like diamonds, turned to the girls and said gently, “You are most welcome. Please, come and
have afternoon tea in our palace.”
It was the most glorious afternoon tea the girls had ever had! They
drank honey-flavoured tea from golden goblets and ate delicious
lemon and raspberry-filled cupcakes until their stomachs were
contentedly full. “Thank you so much for having us,” said
Sarah as she and Theresa finished the last few sips of their
tea. “However, we really should be going as my mother
will be wondering where we are.” The Fairy King and
Queen understood and escorted them to the field in
which the girls had first appeared. “Do come and visit
us again,” the Queen said kindly and with a flick
of her wand, the girls suddenly found themselves
back in the dusty attic.
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The girls looked at each other in amazement, unable to utter a word. They carefully closed
the lid of the toy box and turned the key. “Let’s come back tomorrow,” Theresa whispered as
they tiptoed away from the mystical box. “Yes, but don’t tell anyone what we’ve found,” Sarah
replied. “I doubt anyone would believe us anyway.”
“Sarah, time for dinner!” called her mother from downstairs.
“Coming!” Sarah shouted. She and Theresa carefully closed the attic door, climbed down the
ladder and sat down for their dinner. “I’m afraid we’re not very hungry,” Sarah told her mother
and winked knowingly at her friend!
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The Old Toy Box

“Girls, time for dinner!” called her

“Coming!” Sarah shouted. The

The girls looked at each other in amazement. They carefully

In the blink of an eye, a beautiful Fairy Queen appeared, “What are

“Sarah, time for dinner!” called her mother from downstairs.

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