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Nama : RUSLAN
NIM : 048342599
Program Studi : Sistem Informasi

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have
12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people
come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always
distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we first
met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked together, her
understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company grew far more than
that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with because of
her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams. Her focus and
attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but also by her peers,
who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley would be
a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and experiences you're looking
for in a candidate, and she can quickly become an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact me. As
a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and achievements,
I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez
 Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter
numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
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The parts of the letter marked by numbers 1-3 are as follows:

1. The part of the letter that begins with "Dear Vincent Prasad," is the opening or initial greeting
part of the letter. This is the part where the sender of the letter, Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager,
begins her letter and mentions the name of the recipient, Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst.

2. The next section which starts with "It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for
the Jr. Data Analyst role with Clouddatanow Tech." is the main body of the letter, where the sender
gives a more detailed recommendation of Ashley Singer as a Jr. Data Analyst candidate. It includes
an introduction, justification for the recommendation, and an explanation of the experience
working with Ashley Singer.

3. The last section that begins with "Sincerely, Rachel Gomez" is the closing of the letter. It
contains a closing salutation from the sender of the letter (in this case, "Sincerely"), followed by
the name of the sender of the letter (Rachel Gomez) and her title (Sr. Project Manager). This letter
closing marks the end of the communication and is followed by the sender's signature, if this letter
is printed in a physical format.

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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
 Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together with
samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter
above. (@5 pts)

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Surat di atas memiliki beberapa kesalahan dalam penulisan, tata bahasa, dan format. Berikut
adalah lima kesalahan yang dapat diidentifikasi:

➢ Kesalahan penulisan "thank u" seharusnya ditulis sebagai "Thank you" untuk lebih sesuai
dengan gaya penulisan formal dalam surat.
➢ Kesalahan penulisan "4 july" seharusnya ditulis sebagai "July 4" untuk memenuhi format
penulisan tanggal yang lazim digunakan.
➢ Kesalahan penulisan "n" dalam kalimat "We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory." Seharusnya, "n" diganti dengan "and" untuk membuat kalimat lebih jelas dan
benar secara tata bahasa.
➢ Kesalahan dalam penulisan tanda tangan. Nama "Robert Brown" ditulis dua kali. Tanda
tangan cukup satu kali, dan seharusnya tidak ada tumpang tindih.
➢ Kesalahan dalam penulisan jabatan. Seharusnya, jabatan "Sales Manager" dan bukan “Sales
Manage”
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di bidangnya.
Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith. Tulislah email
ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi narasumber di seminar
internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the field.
One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a thank-you
email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your international seminar.
Your email should be 100-150 words long.

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Subject: A Heartfelt Thank You, Prof. Allen Smith

Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

I hope this message finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee, I want to express our
sincere gratitude for your invaluable contribution to our recent international seminar. Your
expertise and insights as a keynote speaker were instrumental in making the event a resounding
success.
Your profound knowledge and engaging presentation left a lasting impact on our diverse audience,
and the feedback we received from participants has been overwhelmingly positive. Your
willingness to share your expertise with our community is truly appreciated.
Your commitment to advancing knowledge and your dedication to the seminar's theme were
evident throughout your presentation. Your participation has elevated the quality of our event and
has contributed significantly to our mission of knowledge dissemination.
Once again, thank you for your time and expertise. We are truly honored to have had you as our
guest speaker. We hope to have the privilege of collaborating with you again in the future.

Warm regards,
Ruslan
Chair, International Seminar Organizing Committee