TUGAS TUTORIAL 2 Bahasa Inggris

NAMA : AGUS SUSANTO
NIM : 050693311
PRODI : ADMINISTRASI BISNIS
TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2
1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.
Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128
July 1, 2023
Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122
1 Dear Vincent Prasad,
It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.
During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When
we first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across
teams. Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by
me, but also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm
absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She
can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can
quickly become an asset and help your company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.
Sincerely,
3 Rachel Gomez
Sr. Project Manager
Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2
2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.
Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?
We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.
I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Robert Brown
Sales Manage
Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)
TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2
3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)
You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.
ANSWER
1. Number 1: Rachel Gomez's contact information (address, phone number, and email).
Number 2: The contents of the letter are recommendations for Ashley Singer.
Number 3: Rachel Gomez's signature and title as Sr. Project Manager.
2. Sure, here are five errors in the letter:

1. The company name is inconsistent. In the heading, it's mentioned as
"Bridgestone International Co.," but the sign-off mentions "Robert Brown Sales
Manage" instead of "Sales Manager."
2. There are spelling errors in the letter. "Thank u" should be "Thank you," and
"n" should be "and."
3. The date format is inconsistent. The heading uses the format "July 21, 2021,"
while later in the letter, it's mentioned as "4 july."
4. There is a punctuation error in the line "Dear Mr. Reed, Thank u for your letter
of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment?"
There should be a comma after "Mr. Reed" and a period at the end of the
sentence.
5. The phrase "I look forward to receive your order" should be corrected to "I look
forward to receiving your order."
3. Subject: Heartfelt Gratitude for Your Invaluable Contribution to Our International
Seminar
Dear Prof. Allen Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee, I extend our
sincere gratitude for your exceptional contribution as a speaker at our recent
international seminar. Your profound insights and expertise added immense value to
the event, making it a resounding success.
Your willingness to share your knowledge and engage with the audience truly
enriched the experience for all participants. The positive feedback we received
highlights the impact of your presentation on the diverse audience.
We are genuinely thankful for your dedication to advancing the field and for being an
integral part of our seminar. Your commitment to excellence has left a lasting
impression, and we look forward to the possibility of collaborating with you in future
endeavors.
Once again, thank you for your valuable contribution.
Best regards,
[Agus Susanto]

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NAMA : AGUS SUSANTO

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

Sr. Project Manager

Bridgestone International Co.

I look forward to receive your order.

2. Sure, here are five errors in the letter:

Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

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