A Level Commentary Volume 1 Sample Compressed
A Level Commentary Volume 1 Sample Compressed
A Level Commentary Volume 1 Sample Compressed
S SITHOLE
The analysis covered all the five sequences and eventually established the
connecting thread from the title to the last poem in the sequence. A lot more
could have been done in the analysis but greater attention was given to
allusions, allegorical references and parabolic statements-nursing the
conviction that students are often dazzled by these in sleuthing meaning, and
when these are clear, sifting of possible metaphorical meanings will be within
reach. Also to widen the route to possible meaning, synonyms, hypernyms
holonyms, meronyms and hyponyms were used in the analysis. The student is
also invited occasionally to make some errands into the poems through
questions so as to goad attention and concentration.
Title Analysis
Use of the definite article “the” in the title indicates “Temple: with
precision…these are not songs from any temple {a temple} but “the temple”-
a place known already and hence a reliable source.
SEQUENCE 1
The Prologue
The persona is using the first person singular ‘I’ in introducing the search into
this extraterrestrial journey...a pilgrimage to have tellurian {worldly} issues
computed or puzzled out. The use of the first person singular indicates that
matters of the soul are personal, no team work is involved. The persona has
[travelled far]…implying divine providence is a clamber. And, the search has
been made to fine a shrine- {some place of god, prayer, worship or a place of
worship}.The pilgrimage is longish [many moons and many suns] and has
taken a toll to the persona’s physical being. The persona is physically
The persona has this feeling of diffidence and indecision to knock -implying
there are inadequacies that usurp the search for spiritual salvation…absolution
and expiation can be fetched when piety appears not a whole number. A series
of rhetorical questions nudge the persona…in fact this thinking aloud indicates
emotional turmoil.
There are inmates in the shrine, the persona notes, but doubts the audibility of
his the knock although fully aware the teachers [sages] and other students
[initiates] are inside to give the spiritual guidance so desperately hunted for
and is not within earshot. The persona cites some own deficiencies…knows
about songs but never sings, knows about dances but does not dance--this
implies the persona is aware of the rules of piety but is into impiety. The
persona contemplates singing Randy Crawford’s song…after all “randy”
means desire, the persona equally has desire… but unlike “Randy’s which is
sexual, the persona’s is spiritual.
The general expectations in the shrine are known by the persona, like
possession of instruments of worship or singing e.g. drum, flute and the mbira
{a Shona hand piano}.These are concerns that make the persona have a [timid
knock] and a [frightened face].The persona is also aware visiting the shrine
is required of an emissary, not direct confrontation hence the possibility to be
asked what royalty [King] would have given the authority to embark on such
a journey. Also there is the mythical which can be solicited like the voice of a
mermaid. A mermaid is mythical sea creature with a woman’s body and a
fish’s tail. To see or hear a mermaid is generally considered a portent of danger
and disaster hence the persona is in some oxymoronic situation.
The persona is now equipped with a singing gadget [flute] but still doubts own
ability to sing and emphatically introspects [Am I a singer…].The persona
doubts the humanness of his voice, equates it to animal voices… [croaking] -
a frog and [grunt…pig]…It would have been if he sounded like a bird
[swallow].A frog generally represents empty noise and a pig filthy.
In that vein of despondency, the persona questions the perceived totality of the
inability of disability…nobody is totally unable if given a challenge
congruent to their state, for example, a cripple can scale the tree stump…after
all it is not because they are dump, the voice is there [hoarse voice] and
condemnation of the dump is questioned by the persona.
Task
Flute
Pig
Birds
Cripple
Tree
Tree-stump
Fully explain each in relationship to what you think is the meaning of the
poem.
2. Backed by words/phrases from the poem, describe the mood and tone in this
poem.
Murmurs of a Novice
Keywords
Oracle - Greek shrines at which a deity was consulted about the future. An
oracle was also the priest through whom the prophecy was given; as well as
Gaia - The “earth goddess’’ of Greek mythology. The daughter of Chaos, she
was both mother and wife of Uranus, by whom she produced the Cyclopes and
Titans.
Ramses - any of 12 Kings of ancient Egypt 1315 and 1090 BC. Ramses the
great (1304-1237) built many monuments.
Clio - history
Melpomene - tragedy
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Terpsichore - dance
Thalia - comedy
Urania - astronomy
The drum was carved and warmed by the fire of the pyramid furnace, the drum
came from the gate to heaven, for the shape of the pyramid is thought to
symbolize a staircase to the sun, so that kings could climb to heaven. Nobody
should question the song, it is from the Oracle, a deity was consulted and hence
it has the endorsement of the Gods. It is a tune from the [sacred Temple] and
endorsed by Muses--most likely Polyhymnia, a goddess responsible for
hymns.
The poem can be taken to mean that even a novice {someone who has entered
a religious order but has not taken final vows} has room space if support is got
from the gods.
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Act 1 Scene 1
The audience is introduced to King Mbano and his wife Vahosi. The play is a
traditional story, evidenced by the scene introduction, “They are sleeping on
hides on the floor.” Moreover, the costume “Both sleepers are clad in hides
around their waists”, alludes to the traditional setting. Through the simile, “he
starts wailing like a child “, the audience know that something is wrong with
the king. As such the audience’s interest is aroused. The stage direction,
(Laughs), shows the casual relationship between Vahosi, who laughs, and the
king who has a nightmare. The king dreams about his “late father and his
father” building a hut of poles and grass. The hut is however destroyed by
termites and it crumbles “trapping both tribesmen in its debits.” The dream is
a foreshadowing of the destruction of king Mbano of the Shumba totems’
kingdom. King Mbano boasts of his prowess, “Kings don’t withdraw into
shells like tortoises. They champion bravery and tribal interests’ blood.”
Vahosi brings in the idea of a lion which dies in front of the people. The king
argues that the lion was sick, but Vahosi insists on it being unusual for a lion
to die before the people’s eyes. Vahosi advises the king to ‘Consult Svikiro
Gondo.” King Mbano undermines Gondo’s powers, “Is it a medium who has
leadership over this level?” The King prepares for war against whatever might
attack the Rozvi Kingdom.
Act 1 Scene 2
Scene Two opens with a wedding feast, and the Rozvi are celebrating the
marriage between the newly married couple. Among the characters are elders,
who include Mushore and Wedenga. Suddenly, a herd boy arrives, agitated
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Act 1 Scene 3
There is the employment of song in the scene, when at Gondo’s court, young
maids and boys dance to the music. The song, entitled “Kusarima Kwangu”
alludes to the theme of poverty. Svikiro Gondo’s attire is described as
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Act 2 Scene 1
In a series of rhetorical questions, King Mbano expresses his worry about the
aliens. He venerates the ancestral power, “Ancestral decrees are not
debatable.” The audience learn about the king’s polygamous marriage”… a
little time to attend to my sick second wife.” The mentioning of the setting
“Valley of Vultures” brings with it, connotations about war. The place is so
called because vultures would feast on bodies of killed enemies. Flashback is
used as the king tells Mushore about his dream about termites. The king’s
daughter is introduced in the scene. She is described as “a beautiful teenage
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Act 2 Scene 2
There are now three Whites at King Mbano’s court, that is Reverend
Raymond, his wife, and Johns. The natives are aggressive towards the
missionaries. The Rozvi prove to be a warlike tribe as they are quick and ready
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Act 2 Scene 3
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Act 3 Scene 1
The Rozvi and their King try in vain to conjure spirits. The king laments
impending drought. He blames all that on the coming of the Whites, who
described them “as a tribe of graves.” King Mbano blames himself for the
calamities that befall the clan, but Duri assures him that he is not to blame.
Duri suggests that Gondo should be killed in cold blood. He believes that
killing is the solution to most problems, “kill him and rains will fall!” One of
the chiefs suggests killing all the Whites. While the chiefs and elders are
discussing, Raymond arrives with his bible. He is adamant when he is told to
leave. Raymond tries, in vain, to explain religion to the Rozvi but he promises
to work on convincing the people about God.
Act 3 Scene 2
Act 3 Scene 3
Two elders, Mushore and Wedenga discuss the events taking place in their
territory. Mushore confesses that he has failed to stop his family from going
to Gondo’s court for Raymond’s teachings. Wedenga also says the same thing
is happening at his homestead. Mushore laments the ‘death’ of all family
values after Wedenga says that his wife says “she can`t sleep with a pagan.”
The Whites have done away with norms such as “Vachemedzwi” and
“mazita”, which they “denounced as tantamount to wizardry.” The two talk
about the many incidence which mark change among the Rozvi. For instance,
a married woman takes her sick baby to Raymond, against her husband, and
the baby dies. The two divorce because of the incident. At one time, Raymond
is attacked by the people after a woman is killed by alleged spirits. Mushore
pokes fun at Wedenga after the latter has left. Appearance versus reality comes
into play as Mushore praises Wedenga in his presence, “I envy men who don`t
quarrel with their wives but tolerate the impossible to save their matrimony.”
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Umuofia wins a virgin and a teenage boy in a settlement with a nearby tribe.
Ikemefuna, the boy in Okonkwo's care, proves to be the ideal son. Nwoye also
develops a strong bond with the newcomer. Despite his affection for
Ikemefuna and the fact that the boy starts referring to him as "father,"
Okonkwo does not permit himself to express it.
Okonkwo accuses his youngest wife, Ojiugo, of negligence during the Week
of Peace. He brutally beats her, upsetting the holy week's calm. He makes
some sacrifices to demonstrate his penitence, but he has irreparably shocked
his community.
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Okonkwo falls into a depressive state and is unable to eat or sleep. He sees his
friend Obierika and starts to feel a little more alive. Ezinma, Okonkwo's
daughter, becomes ill, but after Okonkwo collects leaves for her medicine, she
recovers.
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His relatives, especially his uncle Uchendu, warmly welcome Okonkwo. They
lend him yam seeds to start a farm and assist him in creating a new compound
of huts. Okonkwo accepts life in his motherland despite being deeply
disappointed by his misfortune.
After selling Okonkwo's yams, Obierika returns to Okonkwo's exile during the
second year with several bags of cowries (shells used as money). Obierika
intends to carry on doing this until Okonkwo arrives back in the village. The
bad news that another village, Abame, was destroyed by the white man is also
delivered by Obierika.
Six missionaries depart shortly after for Mbanta. The leader of the
missionaries, Mr. Brown, converses with the villagers via an interpreter named
Mr. Kiaga. He explains to them that their gods are false and that serving
multiple deities is idolatry. But it is unclear to the villagers how the Holy
Trinity can be regarded as one God. Mr. Brown does not permit his adherents
to incite hostility among the clan, despite the fact that his goal is to convert the
people of Umuofia to Christianity.
After falling ill, Mr. Brown is replaced by the rigid and intolerable Reverend
James Smith. The more fervent adherents are happy to be free of Mr. Brown's
restraint policy. One such convert, Enoch, takes the risk of revealing an
egwugwu during the yearly ceremony honouring the soil deity, which is the
spiritual equivalent of killing an ancestor. The egwugwu destroy Reverend
Smith's church and Enoch's home the following day.
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Five court messengers arrive and tell the clansmen to stop during a conference
the clansmen have after the prisoners are freed. Okonkwo uses his blade to
slay the clan chief in anticipation of his fellow clan members joining him in
revolt. Okonkwo recognises that his clan is not ready for war when the throng
lets the other messengers flee.
The District Commissioner discovers that Okonkwo has hanged himself when
he gets to his compound. The commissioner is led to the body by Obierika and
his friends. Obierika notes that since suicide is considered a serious sin, no one
from Okonkwo's clan is allowed to touch his body. The commissioner thinks
the account of Okonkwo's uprising and demise will make for one or two
intriguing paragraphs in his book on Africa. The Pacification of the Prehistoric
Tribes of the Lower Niger is the title he has already decided on for the book.
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Despite this caution, Okonkwo ultimately uses his machete to attack his
surrogate son out of panic: "He was scared of being weak." Several times in
Part One, Okonkwo demonstrates that he lacks patience with his kids and is
quick to get angry with his wives. He finds himself in a dangerous social
position because of his fixation with upward mobility and traditional
masculinity, which tends to alienate others.
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By the time Okonkwo and his family depart Mbanta, Umuofia has already
experienced significant internal strife due to the foreign population that is
increasing there. Together with the missionaries who had come during his
absence, government representatives also start to trickle in, establishing a
foreign system of law. Okonkwo's return home, which he had anticipated
would signify a fresh beginning, is compromised by the changes in Umuofia.
Okonkwo becomes increasingly enraged with his fellow Umuofians for
refusing to take aggressive action against the missionaries and drive them out
as he finds himself in a passive, emasculated position once more. Okonkwo
views the British as a cancer whose existence will ultimately kill Umuofia and
the nine villages, in contrast to others who commend the British for increasing
access to resources, as well as medical and education.
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Every legacy hunter shows up in the first act to give Volpone a gift, with the
exception of Corbaccio, who just brings a useless (and likely poisonous) vial
of medication. Yet in order for Volpone to repay the favour, Corbaccio
consents to come back later in the day and make Volpone his heir. Since
Corbaccio is very certain to pass away before Volpone does, this deed benefits
Volpone. Volpone and Mosca laugh at the hunters' credulity after they each
go. When Lady Elizabeth Would-be, the wife of an English knight residing in
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A little bit later in the day, Sir Politic Would-be, Lady Politic's husband, is
talking to Peregrine, a young English traveller who has just arrived in Venice,
in the second act. Sir Politic warms to the young lad and promises to teach him
a thing or two about Venice and Venetians; Peregrine also enjoys Sir Politic's
company, but only because he is hysterically vain and naïve. The two were out
on a stroll in the plaza in front of Corvino's home when "Scoto Mantua," who
was actually Volpone posing as an Italian mountebank or medicine show man,
arrived. Scoto delivers a protracted and colourful speech in which he promotes
his new "oil," which is advertised as a panacea for all ills and woes. Celia
complies as the speaker bids the birds toss him their handkerchiefs at the
conclusion of his speech. Just as she finishes, Corvino enters the scene and, in
a fit of jealous wrath, scatters the crows in the square. When Volpone returns
home and confides in Mosca that he is sick with lust for Celia, Mosca swears
she will be given to him. In the meantime, Corvino scolds his wife for
throwing her handkerchief because he thinks it's evidence of her infidelity and
threatens to kill her and her family if she doesn't stop. She will no longer be
permitted to attend church, she cannot stand by windows (as she did when
watching Volpone), and, most oddly, she will have to perform all future
actions backwards, including walking and speaking. When Mosca shows
there, he tells Corvino that Volpone will choose him as his heir if he allows
Celia to have sex with him (as a "restorative" for Volpone's failing health).
Corvino's jealousy abruptly vanishes, and he accepts the offer.
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Peregrine and Sir Politic are still conversing a short while later, in the early
afternoon. Sir Pragmatic advises the young visitor on how to live in Venice
and discusses a number of money-making plans he is considering. Lady Politic
quickly interrupts them because she is certain Peregrine is the prostitute Mosca
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In the third act, Volpone, who had been feigning symptoms of illness, returns
home exhausted and concerned that he is genuinely getting sicker. He decides
to play one last practical joke on the legacy hunters to allay his worries. After
spreading the story that he has passed away, he instructs Mosca to claim that
he is now his master's successor. The strategy works flawlessly, fooling all
three of the legacy hunters. Volpone then assumes the identity of a Venetian
guard so he can brag about each heritage hunter's humiliation without being
noticed. Mosca, however, informs the audience that Volpone is effectively
dead in the eyes of everyone, and that he will not be permitted to "return to the
land of the living" unless Volpone makes good on his obligation and gives
Mosca a cut of his fortune.
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After spending two months in England with his wife and family, Gulliver sets
out on his second sea journey, which will lead him to a place known as
Brobdingnag, a realm of giants. He is found by a field worker here. He is
initially kept by the farmer as nothing more than an animal for entertainment.
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Gulliver then sets sail once more and, following a pirate attack, arrives in
Laputa, where a floating island called Balnibarbi, populated by theorists and
academics, oppresses the land below. The scientific research carried out in
Laputa and Balnibarbi seems completely absurd and impractical, and its
inhabitants also seem completely disconnected from reality. Gulliver takes a
quick detour to Glubbdubdrib where he witnesses the reenactment of historical
figures like Julius Caesar and other military leaders, who he finds to be much
less impressive than in books. He is able to sail to Japan and from there return
to England after visiting the Luggnaggians and the Struldbrugs, the latter of
which are senile immortals who demonstrate that age does not bring wisdom.
Finally, on his fourth journey, Gulliver sets sail as the ship's captain. However,
following a crew mutiny and a lengthy confinement in his cabin, he arrives in
an uncharted territory. Houyhnhnms, the intelligent horses who rule this land,
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Themes
Gulliver's Travels subtly raises the issue of whether social order should be
governed by physical might or moral rightness. Gulliver learns about the
benefits of physical strength both as a person who possesses it—as a giant in
Lilliput who, thanks to his enormous size, can defeat the Blefuscudian navy—
and as a person who lacks it—as a small visitor to Brobdingnag who is
constantly bothered by the enormousness of everything from household pets
to insects. He is physically restrained by the Lilliputians in his first interaction
with another society, and a farmer later enslaves him in Brobdingnag. He also
witnesses the use of physical force against others, such as when the
Houyhnhnms chained the Yahoos.
However, in addition to the use of physical force, there are numerous claims
to power based on moral propriety. The entire egg debate that pits Lilliput
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SECTION A – PROSE
Palm Sunday has come. After attending Mass, Kambili, her brother Jaja, and
their parents, Papa and Mama, head back to their lavish home in Enugu,
Nigeria. Brother Eugene Achike, Kambili's father, was honoured by Father
Benedict during Mass for his significant contributions to the church. Papa was
the first to receive communion. The family had sat in the front pew as usual.
Jaja didn't approach the altar today, though. At home, Jaja responds to Papa's
reprimand for skipping communion. Papa grabs a large religious book and
hurls it at Jaja in a fit of rage. Jaja is not hit by the book, but it does strike
Mama's collection of delicate ceramic figurines, shattering them. Mama
tidying up the mess on the marble floor with calm. Papa takes a seat and enjoys
his tea. Kambili questions why Papa doesn't take more action. The family's
cook and housekeeper Sisi serves them a brand-new juice variety from Papa's
factory for lunch. As expected, Mama and Kambili give the product their
praise, but Jaja remains silent and excuses himself to go to prayer. Kambili
spits up after choking on her beverage. That night as she lay in bed, she came
to understand that Jaja's resoluteness is comparable to the purple hibiscus that
flourishes in Aunty Ifeoma's garden in Nsukka.
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Kambili discovers that Mama is carrying a second kid, who is due in October.
Kambili informs Jaja of the pregnancy while Mama (Sister Beatrice) amuses
her women's prayer group. The news of a military coup is being relayed on the
radio. The Standard's proprietor, Papa, and his editor, Ade Coker, publish
editorials that are critical of the new administration. Roadblocks are manned
by soldiers in Enugu, yet daily life goes on as usual. Jaja and Kambili adhere
to their rigid academic schedules. Every Sunday, the family attends services
at St. Agnes. Infuriating Papa on Pentecost Sunday with Igbo worship songs
is a visiting young priest. Mama requests to stay in the van after Mass rather
than see Father Benedict because she feels sick. Kambili and Jaja notice loud
thuds coming from their parents' bedroom that afternoon. When they look
down, they find Papa dragging Mom like a bag. The blood on the floor is
cleaned up. The family's chauffeur, Kevin, transports Mother from the hospital
to their home. Mother explains that she lost the baby to Kambili and Jaja.
Mother next meticulously cleans her porcelain figurines. The following
Sunday, Papa insists that everyone stay after Mass to pray a novena in hopes
that God will pardon Mom. Kambili doesn't even question why Mama
demands pardon.
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Ade Coker is taken into custody by the authorities, and Papa steps in as editor.
Although though she normally places first, Kambili performs poorly on her
school examinations and places second. As the phone rings, Papa is already
berating Kambili for losing first place. Ade Coker has been badly tormented,
but Papa hears that he is no longer in jail. Papa decides that his publication
must become illegal. When Kevin takes Mama, Kambili, and Jaja to the
market, they see soldiers destroying stalls and beating customers. Papa gives
Kambili a lecture on the opening day of her subsequent academic year,
reminding her that God demands excellence. Kambili has shyness and anxiety
in school. Because she avoids them after school, other girls assume she is a
wealthy snob. Kambili, however, is unable to hang out with them because she
is aware that Kevin will inform Papa of any delays.
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Belonging
Summary
The play is about a young chicken Kuku who has just come of age. She fails
to fit into society among her folk because of her inquisitiveness and desire to
find out more about life.
She is not satisfied with just eating and mating as her type is prone to but wants
more out of life as such she is always at loggerheads with Jobo the rooster in
the flock whose authority she defies.
She also spurns his sexual advances which results in her leaving home and
finding temporary refuge among Bere and his lot in the caves.
Bere is at first fascinated by Kuku’s thinking and they later on become the best
of friends. Bere acknowledging he dies a better animal after having known
Kuku.
Kuku fails to belong among Bere’s lot, the other hyenas do not accept her they
take every chance they can get to scorn and threaten kuku.
She only survives under bere’s protection and as fate would have it after many
rains Bere gets seriously injured on a hunting trip and realises that he is dying.
He takes kuku back to her flock as she is not safe among the other hyenas.
Back amongst her own flock Kuku realises that she does not belong anywhere.
She scorns the way chickens feed and their narrow mindedness but even away
from them she cannot be anything else but a chicken.
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Kuku asserts her identity as an inquisitive hen as she does not accept the status
quo, accepting what life dishes her like her lot .She wants to know why the
chickens are so low down the food chain.
Why the rooster gets to enjoy the mating act not the hens “if there is any that
enjoys that experience…it is only him”.
She questions her role as hen, laying eggs, hatching and looking after her
brood. Has a desire is to know if there is a kind that is free from narrow
mindedness.
She is able to realise that it is not enough for a chicken just to eat ,mate and
wait to be eaten she goes on a quest to find it .She does not delude herself into
thinking that she belongs among the hyenas. She is quick to read through
Ruma’s predatory stare.
She acknowledges that she does not belong anywhere because of her broad
mindedness,” she wants more than a chicken’s life” p.14.
Defiant
The opening line to the play refers to her as a" rebellious” hen.
She defies authority at every turn habitually grabbing worms from right under
Jobo’s beak arguing that she saw it first .Mama kuku explains the need to
respect the pecking order but kuku defies the order questioning Jobo’s
authority over all chickens.
She also spurns Jobo’s mating advances resulting in her fleeing to the bush
when Jobo attempts to mate her.
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She finds Bere’s voice soothing while her mother shudders at it .The rest of
the flock fleas when she comes home with Bere yet she befriended him which
proves that Kuku is indeed defiant.
Daring
She is brave enough to converse with Bere to trust him enough to stay with
him and other hyenas in their liar.
Despite the protection from Bere, her living arrangements are very dangerous
and unpredictable.
Idealistic
She thinks she can run away from her identity (chicken) but it is not practically
possible (p.14)
When Bere asks if she has been hurt by Jobo she clears Jobo explaining that it
is the way of all chickens. She temporarily manages to run but comes back
when she realises that her place is among her flock. Bere is wise enough to
advise her to go back home where she would be safe without Bere’s protection
now that he is dying.
Mama Kuku
Gullible - accepts chicken life as it is and advises her daughter to do the same
.She always reminds her that she is a chicken which is her answer to every
question asked by Kuku.
Accepts Jobo’s position as a leader of the flock. Accepts the rooster’s mating
habits.
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