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Experienced SaaS Brand Builder, Communications Leader, TED Speaker, Maker of lists separated by commas

Fantastic example of an awful bit of copy writing. 1 - no one is really sure what an "Enterprise brand" is 2 - you can't talk to a brand 3 - no one knows what a "commerce platform" is or what is does 4 - as I don't know what a commerce platform is, I have no idea what I might want it to handle 5 - no customer ever said "I wish X could handle everything I throw at it" - it has never happened. It's easily fixed: simply message the real problem your actual customer had, use the words they said, and explain how you fixed it for them.

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Md Rakib Hossen

Creative Graphic Designer | Visual Storyteller | Transforming Ideas into Impactful Designs | 5+ Yrs of Building & Scaling Brands | $100K plus in Client Revenue | Business Challenges with Innovative Digital Solutions

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Absolutely, clarity and customer-centric messaging are key to effective communication. Focus on addressing real customer needs and using their language to explain how your solution solves their problems.

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Nik Dessle

Copy Director / Copywriter — Branding, Advertising, Marketing

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They also forgot the comma after Hey.

Greg Sewastianowicz

Chief Marketing, Growth & Digital Officer | Data-Driven Leader in eCommerce, Gaming, Fintech, Marketplaces & Crypto | Scaling Businesses Globally

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Even the USS Enterprise could not handle anything and everything....

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