Parallel Structure in A Series: Sentence
Parallel Structure in A Series: Sentence
Parallel Structure in A Series: Sentence
have the same level of importance. This can happen at the word, phrase, or clause level.
The usual way to join parallel structures is with the use of coordinating conjunctions such
as "and" or "or."
Maintaining parallel structure helps you avoid grammatically incorrect sentences and
improves your writing style. Although lack of parallelism is not always strictly
incorrect, sentences with parallel structure are easier to read and add a sense of
balance to your writing.
Parallel words
On the word level, a noun should be grouped with other nouns, an adjective with
other adjectives, and so on.
The company is looking for a candidate who The company is looking for a candidate who
is friendly, organized, meticulous, and is going to arrive to work is friendly, organized, meticulous, and punctual.
on time.
When a series is composed of verbs, do not mix forms. For example, mixing an
infinitive (a verb beginning with to) with a gerund (a verb form ending in -ing) breaks
parallel structure.
Not parallel Parallel
The participants in the workshop learned how The participants in the workshop learned how
to communicate, negotiate, and working collaboratively for the to communicate, negotiate, and work collaboratively for the
most effective outcome. most effective outcome.
Parallel phrases
Parallel structure should be used to balance a series of phrases with the same
grammatical structure.
Initial trials showed that exposure to the chemical Initial trials showed that exposure to the chemical
caused memory problems, intermittent dizziness, and deters caused memory problems, intermittent dizziness, and insom
sleep.
As with a series of verbs, a series of verb phrases should use parallel forms. Do not
mix phrases based on an infinitive with phrases based on -ing verbs.
Her main duties were answering phone calls, filing records, Her main duties were answering phone calls, filing records,
and to conduct visitor surveys. and conducting visitor surveys.
Parallel clauses
Parallelism is also applicable to a series of clauses in a sentence.
The report card stated that the student often talked in class, that The report card stated that the student often talked in class,
he bullied other students, and rarely finished his homework. he bullied other students, and that he rarely finished his
homework.
Mainstream economists have attributed the recession to several Mainstream economists have attributed the recession to sev
key causes: deregulation policies, spike in interest key causes: the enactment of deregulation policies, the spik
rates, manufacturing orders declining, and the emergence of interest rates, the decline in manufacturing orders, and the
asset bubbles. emergence of asset bubbles.
She planned to collect data by either using an online She planned to collect data by either using an online
survey or phone interviews. survey or conducting phone interviews.
His paper argues that the distinctive divergence in the two His paper argues that the distinctive divergence in the two
artists’ styles was not only shaped by their mutual rivalry but artists’ styles was shaped not only by their mutual rivalry bu
also because of the idiosyncratic tastes of patrons. also by the idiosyncratic tastes of patrons.
He prefers movie nights at home over going to loud house He prefers movie nights at home over loud house parties.
parties.