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WRITING COMPOSITION

COVID-19 VACCINE UPDATES


1 Is it secure if you get your COVID-19 vaccine? I think COVID-19 vaccine should
Adverb clause of condition
2
be obligatory in our nation. Not only should COVID-19 vaccine be available but
Negative adverb
3 even vaccines should be mandatory for citizens. Here are the reasons why I
Focus adverb Other adverbs
4 believe this is secure. Since COVID-19 vaccines have only been developed in
Adverb clause of reason
5 the past months, it´s too early to know the duration of protection of COVID-19

6 vaccines. Research is going to answer this question. However, it’s encouraging

7 that available data suggest that most people who recover from COVID-19

8 develop an inmune response that provides at least some periodo of protection

9 against reinfection, although we’re still learning how strong this protection is and
Adverb clause of contrast
10 how long it lasts. COVID-19 vaccines produce protection against the disease, as
Adverb clause of time
11 a result of developing an inmune response to the SARS-Cov-2 virus. Developing

12 inmunity through vaccination means there is a reduced risk of developing the

13 illness and its consequences. This inmunity helps you fight the virus if you get
Adverb clause of condition
14 exposed. Getting vaccinated may also protect people around you because if you
Adverb clause of condition
15 are protected from getting infected and from disease, you are les likely to infect

16 someone else, This is particularly important to protect people at increased risk


Adverb of manner
17 for severe illness from COVID-19. Vaccines are certainly effective, regardless of
Sentence adverb
18 the country of origin. Little do many people realize how dangerous COVID-19 can
Negative adverb
19 be. I just don’t agree with the idea of not getting vaccinated.
Focus adverb
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• Line 3: it • Negative • Line 18:


• Line 3:
should be adverbs Little do
vaccines
also • Focus many
should be
obligatory adverbs people
of every mandatory realice how
citizen. for citizens dangerous
COVID-19
can be.
(NEGATIVE
ADVERB)
• Line 3: But
even
vaccines
should be
mandatory
for citizens.
(FOCUS
ADVERB)
• Line 19: I
just don’t
agree with
the idea of
not getting
vaccinated.
(FOCUS
ADVERB)

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