English Stage 5 SOW Tcm142-354086
English Stage 5 SOW Tcm142-354086
English Stage 5 SOW Tcm142-354086
Introduction
This document is a scheme of work created by Cambridge International as a suggested plan for delivery of Cambridge Primary English Stage 5.
Learning objectives for the stage have been grouped into topic areas or ‘units’. These have then been arranged in a recommended teaching order,
but you are free to teach objectives in any order within a stage as your local requirements and resources dictate.
The scheme of work assumes a term length of 10 weeks, with three terms per stage and three units per term. An overview of the sequence, number
and title of each unit for Stage 5 can be seen in the table on the next page. The scheme of work is based on the minimum length of a school year to
allow flexibility. You should be able to add in more teaching time as necessary, to suit the pace of your learners and to fit the work comfortably into
your own term times.
Some learning objectives are designed to be recurring across all units. As such, these are listed separately at the beginning of the scheme of work
as ongoing work across Stage 5. These ongoing learning objectives are followed by the learning objectives for the topic of the unit, and related
grammar and punctuation. Learning objectives are given using their curriculum framework codes and a summary rather than following the precise
wording in the curriculum frameworks. Activities and resources are suggested against the objectives to illustrate possible methods of delivery. In the
fiction and non-fiction units, these include more general activities that can be carried out at any point across the unit to reinforce learners’ skills.
There is no obligation to follow the published Cambridge schemes of work to deliver Cambridge Primary. They have been created solely to provide
an illustration of how delivery might be planned over the six stages. A step-by-step guide to creating your own scheme of work and implementing
Cambridge Primary in your school can be found in the Cambridge Primary Teacher Guide available on the Cambridge Primary support site. Blank
templates are also available on the Cambridge Primary support site for you to use if you wish.
Two sample lesson plans (short-term plans) are included in Appendix A at the end of this document.
During the proofreading and redrafting phase of writing, encourage learners to:
- use word logs, dictionaries and IT spell checks to check their spelling
- use word logs and thesauruses to find and use less repetitive / more effective vocabulary.
5Wo1 Learn and apply effective Give learners regular opportunities for exploring and investigating spelling errors, in particular
5Ws3 ways of spelling new words. errors they have made in their own writing. Encourage use of strategies such as:
5Ws4 - using known spellings to work out the spelling of related words
5Ws5 - building words from syllables, prefixes, suffixes and recognised spelling patterns
5Ws8 - remembering common letter strings which have different pronunciations
5Ws11 - using visual skills to check on the likelihood of a particular spelling of the word.
Revise and develop understanding of plurals. Ask learners to help you to make lists of singular
nouns that end in -s, -es and -ies when they become plural.
Deduce spelling rules, highlighting one example and asking learners to suggest others, e.g. if a
noun ends in:
- -s, -sh, or -x, add -es, e.g. bus, dish, box
- -ch, you usually add -es, e.g. bench (the exception is if the -ch ending is pronounced ‘k’,
e.g. stomach becomes stomachs)
- a consonant and -y, change the -y to -ies, e.g. puppy
- a consonant or a single vowel plus -f or -fe, change the -f or -fe to –ves, e.g. half or knife.
Ask learners to suggest a list of irregular plural nouns, including nouns that remain the same
when singular or plural (e.g sheep).
Continue to use class novels with learners in a variety of ways, e.g. reading aloud to the
class (either with learners simply listening or with them following in their own copies), asking
learners to take turns to read short passages or assigning individuals to read the dialogue of
particular characters.
Revise the features of different fiction genres by giving learners a number of short extracts
illustrating some of the usual features of the genre. For example, you could choose a fable,
an adventure, science fiction, a detective story and a traditional tale.
In pairs, learners first decide the genre of each extract. They then make a list of the typical
features of each genre, both those illustrated in the text and those not illustrated in the text.
They discuss their lists with another pair.
Use the activity above for non-fiction text types, for example a recipe, an explanation, a
biography and an informal letter.
When reading texts as a class, check that learners can both read closely, and skim and scan
for information or evidence in a text. You can develop these skills by giving learners one
minute to try and find the answers to four simple questions relating to an extract of the text.
Model how to skim read quickly to find the relevant paragraph, then home in on the specific
information without reading the whole text.
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Once learners have answered the questions give them more time to read the whole text
closely to see if they gave the correct answers.
Then display questions which need more considered answers. Allow learners to read the
text carefully to give more detailed answers. Include questions where the answer comes not
from one place in the text but from different parts of the text. Discuss answers as a class,
asking learners to explain their ideas in their own words and give references from the text to
back up their ideas.
Display and add to a list of the connectives as they come up in texts. Take opportunities to:
- point to a connective and ask learners to put it into a suitable compound/complex
sentence
- give learners two or three short, simple sentences and ask them to create a
compound/complex sentence using appropriate connectives and punctuation.
Learners should understand that redrafting is not just about copying their work out in neat
handwriting, but is also about improving it. Initially, learners need direction so they
understand what to improve. This can include:
- reference to the success criteria agreed for the piece of work
- reference to personal targets
- redrafting a particular part of their writing, e.g. the climax of the story to include references
to more senses, the beginning to include a hook, or the end to add a twist.
The use of response partners is a valuable aid to learners’ development in writing. Response
partners should read or listen to plans, drafts and/or final version, and comment
constructively on them.
5Wa3 Write letters for real Make use of opportunities for writing a range of letters for real purposes, for example:
5Wa4 purposes. - to the author of the class novel describing what their reflections in the novel and/or the
5Wa9 work it has inspired
- a thank-you letter to a visitor to the school or the venue for a school trip
- an invitation to a potential visitor to the school.
Provide opportunities for learners to plan and deliver a 5-minute presentation on a subject
they are interested in (e.g. a sport, an animal, a hobby). Encourage other learners to listen
carefully so they can respond and ask relevant questions at the end of the talk.
Provide opportunities for learners to talk in pairs about what they have done over the
weekend or during a holiday. They can then either join another pair to report back to, or report
back to the class. When reporting back, ask each learner to report back on what their partner
told them rather than reporting back about themselves.
Encourage learners to reflect on their own and others’ presentations and contribution to
discussions. Help learners to give constructive feedback on others, for example, by asking
them to say two things that went well and one thing that could have been better. Allow
opportunities for further activities where learners are expected to respond to previous
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feedback.
For both types of speech, teach a wider range of adverbs to describe how people speak (e.g.
peevishly, waspishly, enthusiastically).
Explore different examples of replacing verb + adverb with a more powerful verb.
Ask learners to draw ladder diagrams to represent the shades of meaning expressed using
comparatives/superlatives, modified adjectives and specific adjectives. Discuss the meanings.
Ask them to look out for different ways of indicating precise shades of meaning in their reading.
Make sure they understand that sometimes the simple forms are more effective.
Try to find synonyms and antonyms of the words in the ladder diagrams. Make sure learners
understand that synonyms are rarely ‘true synonyms’, because the meaning of a word depends
on its context. Ask learners to consult thesauruses to find how different sets if synonyms can be
gathered for one word.
This is the first of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is four weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of stories, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as writers and analysing features of the text.
Then they will plan and write a story based on one of the texts you have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
three or four short stories or extracts from longer works by significant children’s writers. Try to include a mixture of classic and modern writers.
You will need to have extracts of these stories enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
a video or audio reading of one of the texts (optional, but a useful addition).
Read and enjoy the chosen stories. Identify the different genres of the stories and discuss their
features.
5SL5 Consider what is meant by Introduce the phrase significant children’s writers and discuss it in terms of the stories you have
significant children’s writers read, asking learners to provide evidence for their answers.
and decide whether there is What are the merits of each story? Do learners think they have special features?
evidence in the story you Compare stories by one significant writer with another. Which ones do learners prefer? Why?
have read to justify the Why are some authors granted the status of significant? Is it simply to do with how many
description. books they have written, or are there other reasons?
Poll the learners to find their ideas about other significant children’s writers.
5Ro2 Consider how characters Discuss the characters in a story. What sort of character are they – victim, bully, hero …? Are
5Ro3 are presented. they successful? How does the author want us as readers to respond to them? Are our feelings
5Ri1 about a character being manipulated? If so, how? Discuss how we know about the characters.
5Rv7 Learners should always provide evidence for their responses by considering:
a character’s actions – and other characters’ reactions
how a character speaks as well as what they say
how a character is described
the relationships between characters.
If possible, have learners compare their responses to the print and film versions of the story.
How are the characters presented on screen?
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Unit 1A: Stories by significant children’s writers
Framework Summary of learning Suggested activities
code objectives
5Rw5 Compare the structure of Re-read a story. Remind learners of the work they have done previously in drawing bridges (or
different stories. story mountains) to represent the structure of a story (see Stage 4 Scheme of Work, Unit 2A).
Do learners remember the five stages in a conventional story (introduction, problem/build-up,
climax/conflict, resolution, and conclusion)?
Does the story being read have this structure? Some stories in chapters are made up of a series
of little story bridges, one in each chapter, as well as having an overall story bridge structure.
Ask learners to draw a diagram of the structure of the story.
Consider the opening of the story. Can the learners spot any ‘hooks’ which draw the reader in?
A hook is an event or question which makes the reader sit up and take notice and want to
continue reading to find the answer.
5Wa2 Consider how the addition Consider one of the stories that has been read. How would the story be different if, for example:
5Wa4 of a new character would the main character was a different, ‘better’, version of themselves – even cleverer, more
5Wa8 change a story. cunning or more beautiful (or whatever the key trait of the main character is)?
5SL1 the main character was a completely different version of themselves, perhaps with the
5SL3 opposite characteristics from those described by the author?
5SL5 there was a new character who always undermined the main character?
a playful creature was introduced into the story?
Ask groups of learners to consider a variety of different scenarios whereby one of the characters
is changed or a new character is introduced into the story. They should consider the impact on
the story and prepare a character study of the new character, making careful choices of words
and maintaining the viewpoint.
They could then write a new first paragraph for the story, including a hook which introduces their
new character.
If you give learners a limited amount of space on the page for their planning, it will encourage
them to plan effectively and they won’t be able to write the whole story in their plan.
Ask learners to share their plan with a response partner and tell their story aloud, using the plan
as a guide. The response partner should make suggestions for improvement. Learners can alter
their plans as necessary.
5Wo2 Write a story from a plan. When learners have planned their story, ask them to write the first draft. Give them the shared
5Wa2 success criteria for the story, e.g.:
5Wa4 base your story on one you have read but with a different or new character
5Wa8 include a hook in the beginning of the story to draw readers in and introduce the new
5Wt1 character
show how the inclusion of the new character changes the story
choose words and phrases carefully for your description.
5Wo2 Proofread, edit and redraft After learners have written their first draft of their story, ask them to do the ‘writer’s mumble’, i.e.
5Wa14 the story, improving the read it aloud several times to check it.
5Wa15 selection of vocabulary and Does it meet the success criteria?
checking spelling and Does it make sense, with the events following each other logically?
punctuation. Have you chosen the best words? Try to improve the quality of the verbs and nouns.
Are punctuation and spelling correct?
This is the second of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time
suggested for this unit is four weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of reports and explanations, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as writers and analysing
features of the text. Then they will plan and write their own report and explanations based on one of the texts you have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
a range of non-chronological reports and explanations, related to a cross-curricular topic learners are studying. You will need multiple copies or
photocopies of extracts from some of the reports for shared work
a video of a non-chronological report, e.g. a documentary (optional, but a useful resource to give learners the experience of listening to a non-
chronological report).
Discuss the lists, asking learners to explain why they have written the devices in the order they
have.
Ask them to find information in a book. Do they use the features in the same order they wrote in
their list?
5Ro1 Locate information from Remind learners how to draw and use a KWWL grid. This is a grid with four columns: What I
5Rx1 different sources and use it Know, What I Want to know, Where I will look, and What I have Learnt. Ask learners to suggest
5Rx3 to build on what is already research questions they could address and model writing them in the grid.
known.
Put learners into pairs. Give them the opportunity to do their own research to find answers to
their own questions using a variety of sources, including non-book sources such as videos and
e-texts. Reinforce the strategies of:
skimming to gain an overall sense of a text to decide whether it will be useful for answering
the questions
scanning to find the relevant part of the text
reading the identified part of the text closely to find the answer to the questions.
5Rx2 Extract key points and Introduce learners to the idea of making notes in a diagrammatic form (similar to a mind map) to
5Wo4 group and link ideas; make link ideas even at the note-taking stage.
notes, using simple
abbreviations and write ‘in Model using simple abbreviations in note-making. Stress the fact that the writer will need to
your own words’. understand the notes when they re-read them, so the abbreviations should be clear and useful.
Ask learners to make notes in answer to a research question, using a diagram and showing links
between their ideas. Check that their notes:
include key words and phrases as well as the main ideas
show ways in which ideas can be linked
are written in note form (no sentences, no punctuation).
Now read a paragraph of an explanation and compare the two styles of language. Learners will
find that although it is similar there are usually more connectives, especially of cause and effect
(e.g. so, because) and of sequence (e.g. first, next, meanwhile) in an explanation.
Ask learners to read the complete report and explanation. Do they notice any difference in the
structure of the two types of text? Think about the purpose of each type of text.
The purpose of a non-chronological report is to describe how things are. You should be able
to read sections of the text in any order. There is usually some logic in the order the writer
chooses to present the information, but the text should still work if presented in a different
order.
The purpose of an explanation is to explain how something works. The text usually has an
introduction which is then followed by a series of logical steps explaining the process. The
order of the events is important.
5Rv1 Read and evaluate reports Let learners read a page from a report and consider the use of paragraphs.
for organisation. How do the paragraphs help to structure and organise the ideas?
How are paragraphs in non-fiction texts used differently from those in fiction texts?
Check that all learners have enough information on their plans to write their texts. Ask them to
number the paragraphs to show the order they plan to write in.
Discuss the difference between research and plagiarism. For research purposes, learners can
make notes containing key words and ideas. When writing a report, these key words and
phrases can be used, but sentences and paragraphs cannot be copied from a source (e.g. a
book or website) without acknowledging the source and putting the sentences in inverted
commas. Copying someone else’s words is plagiarism and is unacceptable. Learners must write
their reports in their own words, combining ideas and key words from several different sources.
5Wo4 Plan to write an explanation The explanation should be linked to something learners have done (e.g. in science or
5Wa7 from notes taken. technology) or studied (e.g. in geography or science). Learners will need a good knowledge of
the topic and the processes involved.
Learners should plan their explanation on a flow chart so that they can show the sequence of
events. Model planning an explanation using a flow chart.
Remind learners of the key connectives to show sequence and cause and effect. Include these
on the flow chart.
Learners record their ideas on their plans in note form, including abbreviations where
appropriate.
5SL3 Talk through the plans, Let learners work with a response partner to talk through their plans. As much as possible, they
5SL5 describing the events, should use words and phrases they plan to use when they write. Response partners can give
before writing. feedback and verify that the planned text makes sense.
This is the third of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is two weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of poems and playscripts, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as writers and analysing features
of the text. Then they will plan and write a poem and playscript based on a text they have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
poetry anthologies including poems by significant poets. Try to include a mixture of classic and modern writers. You will need to have some of
the poems enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
playscripts that learners can read, enjoy and perform
access to non-fiction texts about significant poets.
For individual poems, you can ask questions and have discussions about different topics, but
this list includes many of the issues it is interesting to discuss with poetry.
Bring some of the poems discussed by groups back to the whole class for a wider-ranging
discussion and to model good discussion for groups where it didn’t happen.
5Ro5 Find out more about poets Select some significant poets, including modern poets, and challenge learners to find out more
5Rx2 and report back. about them. This can include research in non-fiction books, reference books and on the internet.
5Rx3 Learners should make notes to record what they find out then report back what they have found
5SL8 to share the information with the rest of the class.
5Ro5 Identify what is distinctive Ask learners to research the poetry of the poets they have investigated. They should read
about a particular poet. extensively and collect information about:
style – What is the poet’s style? Is it consistent across several poems? What changes?
form – Does the poet use the same form every time (e.g. rhyme and rhythm, blank verse,
free verse, sonnet form, haiku, limerick)?
themes – Are there particular themes the poet likes to write about?
personal reaction – Would learners recommend this poet to others? Why?
Let learners share their research, including reading some poems that are ‘typical’ of each poet.
Look also at word play and check learners are familiar the terms pun, ambiguity, homophone,
homograph and homonym.
5Wa15 Write a poem based on Re-read one of the poems that has been previously read and discussed. Ask learners what they
poems of significant poets. recall of its:
theme
structure (verses, rhyme and rhythm)
vocabulary.
In shared writing, write a new poem which is closely linked to one of those studied. It should
have the same theme and a similar structure.
Ask learners to decide what sort of poem they want to write – a new poem based on one they
have read or a new verse for an existing poem. Let them write a first draft of their own poem.
When they have made their first attempt, remind learners that poems need to be drafted,
redrafted and polished many times before they are ‘finished’. To help with this, they can re-read
the poems by significant poets, particularly those in the same form and style they have chosen
for their own poem. Ask them to jot down the key features of the form they are writing in.
5Ro3 Begin to plan to perform a When learners are familiar with the playscripts, ask them to begin to plan for a performance.
5SL10 play. Give them success criteria for their performance, including conveying ideas about characters
through careful choice of speech, gesture and movement. The performance doesn’t need to be a
full costume drama, although you may want learners to consider what props they may need.
Model how to annotate the playscript with the additional stage directions needed to perform the
play.
When learners have drafted their play, ask them to plan their performance and to include
production notes as a guide.
While they are rehearsing the play, learners should amend and revise their playscript as
necessary.
Once learners know and understand the terms, look out for them in reading and discuss the
examples you find. What sort of technique is it – idiom, metaphor, simile or figure of speech?
Why has the author chosen to use it here? What effect does it have – more impact, more
memorable …? What alternative words and phrases could the author have used? Would they
have been as good? Does the expression help you to understand the text better?
This is the fourth of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is four weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of stories, first enjoying the texts as readers and then reading as writers and analysing features of the text.
Then they will plan and write a story based on one of the texts you have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
a range of traditional tales including myths, legends and fables from around the world – including the part of the world you are living in. Try to
include a mixture of classic and modern versions, straight retellings and those with a twist. You will need to have extracts of these stories
enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
Ask learners to use a story bridge to plot in one colour the original story they plan to base their
new version on. In a different colour, they can show what they plan to change (if anything) and
explore the implications of that change. Remind them of the work they did last term in changing
character – it can have a significant impact on the plot development.
Ask learners to share their plan with a response partner and tell their story aloud, using the plan
as a guide. The response partner should make suggestions for improvement. Learners can alter
their plans as necessary.
5Wo2 Write a story from a plan. When learners have planned their story, ask them to write the first draft. Give them the success
5Wa1 criteria for the story, e.g.:
5Wa4 the new story should have the features of a fable, myth or legend
5Wa10 use stock settings and characters – even if these are different from the original story
5Wt1 choose words and phrases carefully when describing, particularly when describing actions
and feelings
use figurative language to enhance the impact on the reader.
5Wo2 Proofread, edit and redraft After learners have written the first draft of their story, ask them to do the ‘writer’s mumble’, i.e.
5Wa14 the story, improving the read the story aloud several times to check it.
5Wa15 selection of vocabulary and Does it meet the success criteria?
checking spelling and Does it make sense, with events following one another logically?
punctuation. Have you chosen the best words? Try to improve the quality of the verbs and nouns
Are punctuation and spelling correct?
This is the fifth of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is four weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of recounts, first finding information and enjoying them as readers, then reading as writers and analysing
features of the text. Then they will plan and write recounts based on ones you have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
a range of recounts (these include autobiography and biography and are also found in texts such as novels, shorter books, newspapers diaries
and letters). You will need to have extracts of these texts enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
audios and videos offer opportunities to hear recounts, as people discuss and relive their own experiences and adventures. It is useful for
learners to be able to compare their experiences of written and audio texts.
Discuss why people write about their own experiences. What kinds of things do they usually
write about?
Let groups of learners read a variety of recounts, including letters, diaries, biographies,
autobiographies, obituaries and recount newspaper articles.
Can learners find any differences between the various kinds of recount texts? (Some are first
person recounts, with pronouns I and we; others are third person, with he or she. First-person
recounts often say more about the thoughts and feelings of the person. Third-person recounts
usually concentrate more on the person’s actions and on other people’s reactions to them.)
Introduce the words biography and autobiography and help learners to break the words down to
analyse their meanings (bio = life, -graphy = writing about, auto = by oneself).
Whichever kind of recount text learners are going to write, they should plan it on a flow chart with
boxes headed with the questions Who?, When?, Where?, What? and Why?
Revisit the key features of the text type. Then model completing the flow chart, based on a text
you have shared.
Ask learners to make notes on what they know or have found out about their chosen subject.
When they have gathered their information, ask them to complete their plan. Remind them to
include time connectives.
Remind learners that recounts are similar to narratives in that they tell a story of a life. They
should therefore:
include detail to liven the recount up – often expressed using figurative language
write about a specific incident that will amuse or interest others
include a commentary on the person’s thoughts, reactions and feelings as well as actions.
5SL3 Talk confidently, recounting Before learners write their recount texts, ask them to use their planning notes to tell the recount
5SL5 and describing events, and to a response partner. This kind of conversation is familiar to most learners through their daily
respond to guidance and anecdotes and chats. However, on this occasion, encourage them to use the more formal
feedback. language of a written recount.
The response partner should comment on whether the recount makes sense, as well as on
detail of language and features.
This is the sixth of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is two weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of narrative poems, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as performers and analysing features of
the text. Then they will plan a performance and perform a narrative poem.
Resources needed:
a range of narrative poems. Try to include a mixture of classic and modern writers. You will need to have some of the poems enlarged for all
learners to share, or multiple copies.
For individual poems, you can ask questions and have discussions about different topics, but
this list includes many of the issues it is interesting to discuss with poetry.
Bring some of the poems discussed by groups back to the whole class for a wider-ranging
discussion and to model good discussion for groups where it didn’t happen.
5Ro4 Discuss the form of When all learners have read a range of narrative poems, discuss what they have in common.
narrative poems. (They all tell a story.) What other kinds of poetry can learners think of – poems which describe
people, things, places, seasons? Love poems? Funny poems?
Discuss the fact that narrative poems can vary from short and simple poems (e.g. nursery
rhymes like Humpty Dumpty, Little Bo Peep, Jack and Jill) to more complex poems like The
Ancient Mariner and The Charge of the Light Brigade.
Tell learners that narrative poems are some of the oldest poems in many cultures. Beowulf is a
narrative poem from Anglo Saxon times; The Canterbury Tales and ballads are from medieval
times.
Try to find narrative poems from different times and cultures. Explore what they have in common
and how the time and culture in which they were written impact on them.
Support learners while they work to understand their poem – without a good understanding of
the poem, their performance of it will be meaningless. Model reading the poem aloud so that it
becomes more than a chant. Learners need to properly read it for sense.
5Ro4 Prepare to perform a When you are sure learners understand the language of the poem, they will need to decide:
5Wa11 narrative poem. how they are going to perform it (e.g. as a puppet show, play, mime or recitation …)
how they are going to share out the reading (e.g. by simple division, by allocating different
voices to different characters …)
how they will read the chorus.
Encourage learners to make production notes on their scripts to remind them what they have to
do and how to do it.
A preposition followed by a noun phrase is a prepositional phrase, e.g. at dinner time, during the
film, in my bedroom, under the bridge, over the page, to the forest, beyond the hills, with my
friends.
Learners may notice that many of these prepositional phrases would also function as adverbial
phrases in a sentence if they told you more about where or when something happened.
Once learners are familiar with the idea of prepositional phrases, they should look for them in
their reading and notice how they are used and when they occur. They will observe that many
paragraphs begin with a prepositional phrase.
5Wp7 Use apostrophes for Revisit the work done last year on pronouns. Can learners remember what the function of a
5Wp8 possession and shortened pronoun is? (It replaces a noun phrase to avoid being repetitive.)
5Ws10 forms.
Introduce the term possessive pronoun. Explain that this is a pronoun which replaces a noun
Spell and make correct use phrase and tells you who the thing in the noun phrase belongs to. Write sentences like these:
of possessive pronouns. That book is yours.
Is this their book?
Understand grammatical I think this is my book.
homophones.
Ask learners what word they could use to replace the underlined noun phrase (theirs, yours,
mine). These are possessive pronouns (the whole list is mine, yours, his, hers, its, ours, theirs).
Ask learners to look out for possessive noun phrases in their reading and collect them in their
notebooks. Stress the fact that although they show possession, possessive pronouns do not
have an apostrophe.
Discuss the difference between its (to express possession, as in I got off my bike and put it down
on its side) and it’s (contraction of it is, as in It’s a lovely day to go for a bike ride). Ask learners
to think of ways of distinguishing them (e.g. try to convert it into it is: if it doesn’t make sense,
there shouldn’t be an apostrophe).
This is the seventh of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time
suggested for this unit is four weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss either a short novel or a variety of stories, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as writers and analysing
features of the text. Then they will plan and write a story based on one of the texts you have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
a range of stories set in different cultures. You may wish to choose some longer and more challenging texts for your shared work, though you
should also have some shorter and more accessible stories for your group and independent work. You will need to have extracts of your main
text enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
Once you have identified the point of view character, look again at the other characters in the
story.
How are they presented?
What do we know of their thoughts and opinions?
Might they have a different perspective form the main character?
Discuss why all of this information has to be given towards the beginning of a short story. How
would the reading experience be different if we didn’t know any of it?
Does the writer include a hook to draw readers into the story from the start and keep them
interested in carrying on reading? What hook does the author of the story that you are reading
use?
5Wa1 Plan an alternative version Tell learners they are going to retell a story, changing the point of view character. Unlike the
5Wa2 of a story you have read story they wrote in the first term, this time they won’t change any of the characters in the story,
5Wa4 with a different point of view just tell the same story from a different point of view. Ask them to think about how this change
5Wa8 character. will alter the story.
5Wt1
If learners have difficulty with this idea, ask them to think of an easy story like Jack and the
Beanstalk:
How did the giant feel when a boy stole his belongings?
Why did he think it was acceptable to want to grind his bones to make my bread?
Could the story be about a poor giant who simply chases a thief off his land?
If so, is the way the story ends fair? What could be different?
Ask learners to use a story bridge to plot in one colour the original story they plan to base their
new version on. In a different colour, they can show what they plan to change in the story
structure (if anything – remember this is the same story). In the different colour, they can also
show changes in the way events are viewed because the point of view character has changed.
Ask learners to share their plan with a response partner and tell their story aloud, using the plan
as a guide. The response partner should make suggestions for improvement. Learners can alter
their plans as necessary.
5Wo2 Write a story from a plan. When learners have planned their story, ask them to write the first draft. Give them the success
5Wa1 criteria for the story, e.g.:
5Wa4 retell a story, changing only the point of view character
5Wa8 make sure all the actions in the original story have the same results
5Wt1 give the story a strong beginning which introduces the characters and settings and has a
hook
choose words and phrases carefully for your description, particularly when describing actions
and feelings
use figurative language to enhance the impact on the reader.
5Wo2 Proofread, edit and redraft After learners have written the first draft of their story, ask them to do the ‘writer’s mumble’, i.e.
5Wa14 the story, improving the read the story aloud several times to check it.
5Wa15 selection of vocabulary and Does it meet the success criteria?
checking spelling and Does it make sense, with events following one another logically?
punctuation. Have you chosen the best words? Try to improve the quality of the verbs and nouns
Are punctuation and spelling correct?
This is the eighth of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is four weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of persuasive texts, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as writers and analysing features of the
text. Then they will plan and write persuasive texts based on ones you have read and analysed.
Resources needed:
a range of persuasive texts. These could include: advertisements, brochures for days out and holidays, letters to local newspapers, political
documents either local or national. You will need to have extracts of some of the texts enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
access to the internet and to TV adverts will also support this work. Some TV programmes, e.g. consumer affairs and investigative journalism,
can also be good examples of persuasive texts.
Let learners share their responses and evaluations to begin to build up a class list. Compare this
with the list of features of the spoken texts.
Explore how each of the different features has been used to good effect.
Again, ask learners to contribute their lists of features to the one you are developing as a class.
Pause after the list is complete and consider the purpose of each of the different features and
how it can be used effectively.
5Rv4 Note the use of persuasive Introduce letters and persuasive texts which acknowledge that there is another point of view.
5Wt3 devices, words and Discuss:
5SL11 phrases in print and other how the text is structured (e.g. are all opinions for the case put forward first, followed by
media, and begin to those against it, or are they intermingled?)
establish links and discuss how ideas against the proposal are made light of or dismissed (e.g. Although some
language choices. misguided people think …)
the use of rhetorical devices (e.g. How can anyone argue against this case?)
the use of connectives to sequence the ideas in the argument (e.g. furthermore,
nevertheless, moreover).
Look carefully at each of the features and evaluate how effectively it has been used.
5Rv3 Compare writing that Let learners compare the persuasive letters with reports or explanations about the same topic.
informs and persuades. Ask learners to identify the differences between the different types of text.
Revisit the features of advertising texts and brochures. Discuss the best way of planning them:
diagram or flow chart? These texts are usually non-chronological, so a diagram is often the most
effective device.
Ask learners to make notes on their diagram about how they will persuade someone to visit the
place/event or go on the holiday. These should include the range of features you have
discussed.
Possibly challenge learners to make a radio advert for the same place, event or holiday.
5Wa3 Plan a persuasive text, e.g. Discuss issues that learners really care about. These could include issues at school (e.g.
5Wa9 a letter or commentary, that homework, uniform), in the local community or in the wider community (e.g. conservation or an
5Wa12 acknowledges an opinion environmental issue).
different from your personal
view. Ask learners to draw up lists of ideas in favour of and against their own view and then transfer
them to a plan They should include connectives on their plan, and arrows or numbers to show
the order in which they intend to address the issues.
5Wa1 Write a persuasive text Ask learners to use their plan as the basis for the first draft of their persuasive text. Give them
5Wa3 from the plan. the success criteria. For example:
5Wa4 have a clear purpose and be clear about the audience you are writing for
5Wa9 persuade the reader to do or think something
5Wa12 include relevant features from the lists you have made, and use these features effectively
5Wt1 make sure the sentence structure and vocabulary suit the purpose of the text
use specialise vocabulary to match the topic
use figurative language to enhance the impact on the reader
choose words and phrases carefully for your descriptions.
This is the ninth of nine units for Stage 5. You should expect to cover three units each term (fiction, non-fiction, poetry/playscripts). Time suggested
for this unit is two weeks.
Outline:
Learners will read and discuss a variety of poems for performance, first enjoying the texts as readers, then reading as performers and analysing
features of the text. Then they will plan a performance and perform two poems.
Resources needed:
poetry anthologies including poems for performance. Try to include a mixture of classic and modern writers. You will need to have some of the
poems enlarged for all learners to share, or multiple copies.
an audio or video of poets performing their own and others’ poems.
Bring some of the poems discussed by groups back to the whole class for a wider-ranging
discussion.
5Ro4 Read and perform narrative Unlike narrative poems, there is no single definition of what is a performance poem except that it
poetry must be a poem which people can perform successfully. Ask learners what criteria they used to
decide which poems to include in the list of poems that could be performed.
Encourage discussion and debate about whether all poetry can be performed.
5Ro4 Read and perform narrative Each group of learners chooses two contrasting poems to perform. All members of the group
poetry should be able to justify the choices, explaining:
why each of the poems was selected
what makes them suitable for performance
how they compare and contrast.
Support learners while they work to understand their poems – without a good understanding of
them, the performances will be meaningless. Model reading the poems aloud so that they
become more than a chant.
Learners need to properly read the poems for sense.
5Ro4 Prepare to perform the When you are sure learners have understood the language of the poems, they will need to
5Wa11 poems. decide:
how they are going to perform them (e.g. as puppet shows, plays, mimes or recitations …)
how they are going to share out the reading (e.g. by simple division, by allocating different
voices to different characters …)
how they will read the chorus.
Encourage learners to make production notes on their scripts to remind them what they have to
do and how to do it.
25 mins 5Wp2 Combine simple Can I rewrite simple Discuss sentences on worksheet, identify clauses W/I Worksheets: M
sentences and re-order sentences using and suggest ways of rewriting by combining simple ‘Sentences 1’ (simple
clauses to make connectives to create sentences. sentences) and
compound and complex compound sentences? Write: Rewrite simple sentences as compound ‘Sentences 2’ (more
sentences. (Groups 1 & 2) (Groups 1 and 2) or complex sentences (Group 3).** challenging
Can I rewrite simple sentences)
sentence using
connectives to create
complex sentences?
(Group 3)
5 mins 5Wa8 Write from another Can a write from a Set homework – see below. W ‘Postcard’ sheet like a
viewpoint. character’s viewpoint? template
Organisation: details of differentiation / groups / adults’ role (linked to activities) Notes / extension opportunities / homework
* Class in two groups: half answer one question, half the other. Extension for Group 3: Find different ways of ordering clauses without affecting Q&A: question and
** Group 1 A worksheet of simple sentences with given connectives meaning. answer
Group 2 A worksheet of simple sentence with no given connectives Homework: Imagine you are Barney. Write a postcard to a friend describing what D: discussion
Group 3 A worksheet of complex sentences happened to you today.
Teacher: work with Group 3; Helper: support Group 1. O: observation
Next time: Planning – ways of planning to create a new scene based on the story.
M: marked work