Ways of Writing Bright, Interesting Stories and
Ways of Writing Bright, Interesting Stories and
Ways of Writing Bright, Interesting Stories and
WRITING BRIGHT
AND INTERESTING
SCIENCE NEWS
STORIES
1. UNDERSTAND THE JARGON
• Scientific names and technical terms (sometimes called jargon) are necessary for
scientists. It enables them to speak more accurately to one another about things
they have in common. If a surgeon told his assistant to cut "the big tube" during
an operation, all sorts of mistakes could happen. Instead, the surgeon might talk
about a patient's "aorta" or "vena cava", so that there was no mistake.
• Remember, you are the bridge between the scientists and the readers or
listeners. Where possible, you should explain the jargon in language your
audience will understand.
Ex. Researchers in California say they have found a new way of testing unborn
babies for spina bifida - a deformity of the spine which can cause paralysis.
2. USE CONCRETE WORDS WHERE
POSSIBLE
• Your audience will not like long boring explanations . Keep your words clear and
simple.
• Do not use too many scientific terms and explain them in simple words.
• Keep your sentences short and simple.
• Try to limit the important ideas to one (or two at the most) per sentence.
• Do not, however, mistake shallow writing for bright writing.
• Also, do not make jokes about scientific developments unless they are recognized
as humorous.
RIGHT: WRONG:
Pig farmers on New Ireland are Farmers on New Ireland are battling a
battling an insect plague which has plague of the new insect species
already killed more than 500 pigs on penetrens lugoles which is related to
the island. the horse fly and has devastated large
herds of pigs in Africa and South East
The insect, which is related to the Asia and already killed 527 pigs on the
horse fly, has already devastated island by laying eggs in their ears
herds in Africa and South East Asia. which eventually hatch into maggots
which burrow their way into the
The new species called penetrens animal's brain in search of food.
lugoles lays its eggs in pigs' ears.
When the eggs hatch, the maggots
burrow into the animal's brain in
search of food.
5. DO NOT SENSATIONALIZE
• NEVER sensationalize a story. State the facts in a clear, simple and interesting
way. It is a great challenge to write a medical story without using words like
"miracle cure", but it can be done - and it is more rewarding than the easy lie.
• Example:
• Scientists researching a new drug will seldom claim that they have found a cure
for a certain disease. They are more likely to say it is "a step towards a cure" or
"a possible way of preventing the disease" or even "a way of reducing the
symptoms". They do not want to raise false hopes. If you then write that
"scientists have found a cure for cancer", it will raise the hopes of everyone with
the disease and all their relatives. When they discover that they themselves
cannot be cured, they will feel even worse than before your story.
6. GIVE BACKGROUND DETAILS
• You need to give background details in most stories, because they help your readers or listeners to
understand what has happened and how important (or disappointing) the latest development is.
• They should be kept as short as possible because your audience is mainly interested in the latest
news, not in history.
Ex:
In a story about an AIDS drug, explain what scientists know about the disease and how many people
it has so far killed, especially in your country or region.
When reporting the results of a study into water cleanliness, give some of the history of the project.
7. ILLUSTRATE YOUR STORY
• For example, you might use a picture of a new coffee drying machine. Your caption can give some
details about the machine, but save your explanations of how it works for the story itself. (In
television, your explanation can be illustrated by film of the different parts of the machine in action).
TO SUMMARISE:
• Never write a story until you understand all the information you will need to use
• Do not take sides in scientific controversies - just report the arguments
• Avoid jargon
• Use concrete images to explain abstract ideas
• Write brightly and simply
• Do not sensationalize
• Think of the best ways of illustrating any story
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