The Secret To Great Comic Stories
The Secret To Great Comic Stories
The Secret To Great Comic Stories
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THE SECRET OFOF
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FEATURING…
The Muse
The Writer
The Executive
Based On A Theory and Materials Developed By Melanie Anne Phillips & Chris Huntley
The Secret of Great Stories: Volume 1,
“How Does Story Work?”
Written by
Mark Haslett and Stephen Greenfield
SECOND EDITION
October 1999
ISN'T THIS
GREAT SO FAR?
HI DAMIEN.
CINDY JUST LEFT ME
YOUR STORIES 'CAUSE I'M NOT OPEN
AREN'T YOU. THEY LET ME HELP.
WITH HER. I'M A DEVELOPMENT
TELL ME YOU'RE A
PRETEND ARTIST. B-BUT... EXEC., YOU KNOW!
CREATE
EMOTION! WHY NOT WRITE
TIE THE HERO'S THE STORY YOU
GIRL TO WANT TO WRITE?
THAT BOMB!
LET'S GO! FOLLOW
THE
DIE HARD
FORMULA!
WHO'S THAT?
S
T' AS AN EXEC,
HA Y I KNOW WHAT
, W TIN S Y.
LL
O A OW GL CINDY'S SAYING:
L N
HE IS? FOL ACI WRITE FOR THE
TH HT EN AUDIENCE!
G M
LI N,
N
PE O.K., IF FORMULA
CAN ADD DEPTH. I
WISH THERE WAS
ANOTHER WAY,
THOUGH.
I USED TO
GIVE ELIXIRS
TO ANCIENT
I THOUGHT GREEK
MUSES DISAPPEARED POETS...
IN THE WRITER'S
STRIKE!
NOT TRUE,
AND BE GLAD
'CAUSE YOUR
STORY'S IN TELL ME WHAT
TROUBLE. YOU WANT AND ...BUT YOU MAY
I CAN HELP. WANT A WHOLE
NEW APPROACH. TRY DRAMATICA.
A STORYFORM HAS
EVERYTHING YOU NEED
TO MAKE YOUR STORY
COMPLETE. IT WILL HELP
YOU GET THAT EMOTIONAL
SIDE FULLY DEVELOPED.
HOW COULD THEY? WATCH IT! THESE
PSHAW! I JUST GOTTA WORK THINGS AREN'T FREE!
COMPUTERS CAN'T ON THIS FORMULA
DRAMATICA WORKS
DEVELOP STORIES. SOME MORE!
USING THE STRUCTURE
AND DYNAMICS INHERENT
IN ALL STORIES. YOU CAN'T
JUST THROW IN EMOTIONAL
"STUFF" TO FIX YOUR SCRIPT.
STORY IS LIKE
AN ARGUMENT:
EVERY PART RELATES TO
ALL THE OTHERS. YEAH?
CREATING A STORYFORM
IS LIKE DRAWING A
CIRCLE BY USING THE
POINTS ALONG ITS EDGE.
LIKE WHEN
EVERYTHING FALLS
INTO PLACE - WHEN
YOU GET A SENSE
OF CLOSURE.
I DON'T HAVE
AN EXACT
DEFINITION. I
JUST KNOW WHEN
I SEE ONE.
ONE CONCEPT THAT THIS IS THE IDEA THAT
SETS DRAMATICA APART A COMPLETE STORY IS THE
MODEL OF A SINGLE MIND
IS CALLED THE
AT WORK FINDING THE
"STORY MIND." SOLUTION TO A SINGLE
PROBLEM.
PRETTY
CEREBRAL.
"BE CAREFUL
IN THERE..."
"THAT'S THE
OVERALL
STORY
VIEW!"
"THESE FOUR PERSPECTIVES CREATE THE THOUGHTS OF THE STORY MIND
AS IT WORKS OUT ITS PROBLEM."
THE MAIN CHARACTER AND "THIS RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN THE MAIN AND
IMPACT CHARACTER ARE IMPACT CHARACTER IS THE EMOTIONAL HEART OF
CHARACTERS WHOM WE DEAL YOUR STORY. THESE TWO ARGUE ABOUT SOME
WITH EMOTIONALLY. PERSONAL ISSUE UNTIL ONE OF THEM CHANGES AT
THE END."
THE IMPACT
CHARACTER'S IMPACT ON
THE MAIN CHARACTER
CREATES AN ARGUMENT
BETWEEN THEM, WHICH IS
THE STORY MIND'S FOURTH
POINT OF VIEW:
THE MAIN VS. IMPACT
STORY.
THESE FOUR PERSPECTIVES STRETCH FROM THE BEGINNING OF THE STORY TO THE END.
THEY ARE ITS FOUR STRUCTURAL THROUGHLINES.
OVERALL STORY
MAIN CHARACTER
IMPACT CHARACTER
MAIN VS. IMPACT STORY
CAN I SEE AN
EXAMPLE? SURE.
REMEMBER HARPER LEE'S
TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD?
THE MAIN CHARACTER IS A
GIRL NAMED SCOUT
SCOUT.
"THE OVERALL STORY THROUGHLINE FOLLOWS "TO SCOUT, THOUGH, LOCAL BOOGEY-MAN,
THE TRIAL OF A WRONGLY ACCUSED MAN. THE BOO RADLEY IS HER IMPACT CHARACTER
CHARACTER."
ANTAGONIST IS HIS ACCUSER, BOB EWELL."
A MISSING IMPACT
CHARACTER CAN HAMSTRING CAN SHE IMPACT HIM
A STORY'S EMOTIONAL EMOTIONALLY ACT BY
INVOLVEMENT. ACT THROUGH THE
STORY?
MAGICAL POWERS DON'T SELL I'M HERE TO HELP YOU
HOLD ON, SCRIPTS, DEVELOPMENT PEOPLE COMPLETE THE STORY YOU
LET'S MEET DO! LET'S COPY DIE HARD AND WANT TO WRITE, PENN.
FIRST. BE DONE WITH IT!
...AND THE
I'M CALLIOPE,
NOTHING SELLS PROGRAM WILL
THE MUSE OF
LIKE A STRONG INSPIRE ME?
STORY.
COMPLETE
STORY.
TREATMENT OR
FIRST DRAFT!
ALRIGHT, I'LL
LOOK AT YOUR
FIRST, WHAT DO WE
QUESTIONS.
GREAT! KNOW ABOUT YOUR
CINDY WOULD
MAIN CHARACTER?
WANT ME TO.
UH...
GOOD. WELL...
THAT'S EBENEEZER
SCROOGE AND HIS IMPACT ALL CHARACTERS
CHARACTER, THE GHOST OF CHANGE, OR ELSE
CHRISTMAS. WILL HE THERE'S NO
CHANGE OR REMAIN GROWTH OR
STEADFAST? DEVELOPMENT.
WHAT'S YOUR
MAIN
CHARACTER'S
APPROACH— NOT NECESSARILY. A
DO-ER BE-ER PREFERS TO
OR BE-ER? I CAN'T TAKE IT! PROBLEM-SOLVE
INTERNALLY.
DO-ER/BE-ER
DOES NOT MEAN
ACTIVE/PASSIVE. EITHER
APPROACH MAY WORK TO SOLVE
A PROBLEM. EVERYONE HAS A
PREFERENCE. THIS YOGI IS AN
"ACTIVE" BE-ER. HIS
POWERFUL PRESENCE
CAN WORK LIKE A PUNCH
IN THE MOUTH.
LET'S WATCH
A BE-ER AT
WORK.
GREAT! MIX IT
UP SO HE'S
UNPREDICTABLE.
THAT'LL
WORK.
"THAT COMPLETES THE MAIN CHARACTER DYNAMICS, HOW HE THINKS, ACTS, AND GROWS THROUGH YOUR STORY.
LATER, DRAMATICA WILL TELL A LOT MORE ABOUT YOUR MAIN CHARACTER -- BASED ON THE REST OF
THESE QUESTIONS."
...NOW, LET'S SHIFT GEARS: THE NEXT FOUR
QUESTIONS ARE ABOUT PLOT. FOR EXAMPLE --
STORY DRIVER ASKS WHAT DRIVES YOUR STORY,
ACTIONS OR DECISIONS?
PENN'S STORY'S GOT
ACTIONS AND DECISIONS! ALL STORIES HAVE
THAT'S WHAT MAKES BOTH, BUT ONE ALWAYS
IT SO GOOD. FORCES THE OTHER. STORY
DRIVER ASKS WHICH COMES FIRST
IN YOUR STORY.
NO, THE
OFFENSE MAKES ITS RIGHT!
PLANS IN THE THEIR ACTIONS
HUDDLE. SO...FOR ALL FOLLOW
THEM IT'S CAREFUL ON DEFENSE, THE
DRIVEN BY DELIBERATIONS. PLAYERS FOLLOW THAT
DECISIONS! BALL WHERE EVER IT GOES.
TO THEM, THE GAME IS
DRIVEN BY ACTIONS.
Shh.
STORY DRIVER ALSO
AFFECTS THE MAIN CHAR-
ACTER. HAMLET'S STORY JOHN MCCLANE IN
IS DRIVEN BY ACTIONS-- DIE HARD IS A DO-ER,
...CONCLUDING INCI- BEGINNING WITH THE SUITED TO HIS
DENT, AND EVERY THAT'S
APPEARANCE OF A GHOST. WHAT WE WANT, ACTION DRI-
ACT BREAK. VEN STORY.
PENN, PICK "ACTION."
THEY WILL
FEEL TENSION RISE THAT'S A TIME- HEY, THAT
IF THE END IS LIMITED LOCK. SET UP THE DOES TIGHTEN
BY A TIMELOCK AMOUNT OF TIME THINGS UP.
OR AN OPTIONLOCK. YOUR CHARACTERS
HAVE RIGHT UP
FRONT...
WE'LL FIND THE FINAL
TWO DYNAMICS AT THE
STORY'S END.
I THINK HE'S
A DO-ER
DO-ER!
THE AUDIENCE
JUST HAS TO
KNOW IF THE
ORIGINAL GOAL
WAS REACHED OR
NOT. OUTCOME
IS A COLD LOOK AT
THE STORY GOAL. THE NEXT
QUESTION, STORY JUDG-
MENT, IS MUCH MORE
EMOTIONAL.
MAN!
WHAT A SORE LOSER. PARDON ME.
EXCUSE ME.
STORY JUDGMENT ASKS,
"DOES YOUR MAIN CHARACTER
RESOLVE HIS PERSONAL PROBLEMS
OR NOT?"
IF HE'S FREE OF
HIS EMOTIONAL ANGST IN
THE END, THE JUDGMENT
GOOD
IS "GOOD
GOOD."
...PERSONAL TRAGEDIES,
OUTCOME AND ENDING IN SUCCESS/BAD
JUDGMENT COMBINE WHERE THE MAIN CHARACTER
TO CREATE FOUR REMAINS
KINDS OF ENDINGS. TROUBLED
IN SPITE OF
SUCCESS--
LIKE
SILENCE OF
TRAGEDIES, WHICH THE LAMBS
LAMBS.
END IN FAILURE/BAD
LIKE HAMLET
HAMLET.
GREAT!
HAPPY ENDINGS
SELL!
THIS COULD BE
THE BEGINNING OF
A BEAUTIFUL
RELATIONSHIP!
I LIKE THESE QUESTIONS. MY WELL, DARLING. MORE IS
CHARACTERS AND PLOT ARE HAPPENING THAN JUST YOU A STORYFORM LISTS ALL
STRONGER, BUT MY ANSWERS ANSWERING QUESTIONS. THE DYNAMIC AND STRUCTURAL
HAVEN'T REALLY STRUCTURED MY DRAMATICA'S USING PARTS OF YOUR STORY: THE
STORY. I NEED AN EMOTIONAL YOUR ANSWERS TO INTRICACIES OF ITS ARGUMENT.
POWERHOUSE TO GET CINDY CREATE THE STORYFORM IT WON'T SAY HOW TO
BACK. FOR YOUR STORY. WRITE IT--JUST WHAT YOU'LL
HAVE TO COVER TO MAKE
YEAH. I CAN ASK THE STORY COMPLETE.
PENN A BUNCH OF
QUESTIONS TOO--
WITHOUT DRAMATICA!
THIS IS WILD!
...OR AT THE BEGINNING THESE STAGES ARE
OF THE IMPACT CHARACTER THROUGHLINE? TAKING ME DEEPER
WHAT DO YOU EMPHASIZE MOST, THE MAIN INTO MY STORY
CHARACTER? THE OVERALL STORY? OR THAN I'VE EVER
SOME OTHER THROUGHLINE? ANYTHING'S BEEN BEFORE.
POSSIBLE. THAT'S THE WORK OF STORYWEAVING
WHICH COMES AS YOU WRITE DRAFTS OF THE STORY.
RIGHT. THOSE FOUR PERSPECTIVES ARE
THE WAYS TO SEE INTO YOUR STORY.
THERE'S A PROBLEM AT THE YOUR STORY IDEA GIVES THEM
HEART OF YOUR STORY. THAT'S SOMETHING TO LOOK AT.
WHERE STRUCTURE COMES FROM.
UNTIL YOU SEE IT CLEARLY AS THE
AUTHOR, YOUR STORY WILL REMAIN
A SNARLED JUNGLE OF IDEAS.
THE AUDIENCE
FOLLOWS THE FOUR
THROUGHLINES WHICH
EXPLORE THE PROBLEM
STRUCTURE DEALS WITH AT THE HEART OF YOUR
OUR THROUGHLINES, RIGHT? STORY. TO GET MEANING
THE OVERALL STORY, THE MAIN OUT OF THEM, THE THROUGHLINES
CHARACTER, THE IMPACT NEED SOMETHING SPECIFIC TO
CHARACTER, AND THE EXPLORE.
MAIN VS. IMPACT STORY?
THE SITUATION CLASS THE ACTIVITY CLASS THE MANIPULATION CLASS THE FIXED ATTITUDE CLASS
DESCRIBES A DESCRIBES A DESCRIBES A DESCRIBES A
STATIC EXTERNAL CHANGING EXTERNAL CHANGING INTERNAL STATIC INTERNAL
PROBLEM PROBLEM PROBLEM PROBLEM
BUT PENN'S STORY DEALS WITH ALL SURE, TAKE CASABLANCA
CASABLANCA. ITS OVERALL STORY
FOUR KINDS OF PROBLEMS. THROUGHLINE IS AN "ACTIVITY"
"ACTIVITY"—WHERE
EVERYONE'S TRYING TO OBTAIN "EXIT VISAS" TO
THESE FOUR ESCAPE GROWING NAZI CONTROL.
CLASSES ARE
IN EVERY
STORY.
AUDIENCE!
"RICK IS A MAIN CHARACTER WHOSE "BUT HE'S FORCED TO RECONSIDER THE MAIN VS. IMPACT STORY EXPLORES
"FIXED ATTITUDE" IS THAT..." HIS WAYS BY HIS IMPACT THE "MANIPULATIONS" BETWEEN RICK AND ILSA
CHARACTER, ILSA, WHOSE IS STUCK AS THEY MANIPULATE EACH OTHER OVER THEIR
IN A "SITUATION"
"SITUATION". SHE IS CAUGHT LOVES AND LOYALTIES.
IN CASABLANCA AND MARRIED TO
A FREEDOM
FIGHTER.
THE PROBLEM AT THE HEART OF YOUR STORY YOUR CHOICE WILL FLAVOR THE STORY YOU
IS SOMEWHERE OUT THERE. BY ANSWERING TELL. YOUR OVERALL STORY MAY FALL INTO
QUESTIONS ABOUT IT, DRAMATICA WILL LEAD ANY ONE OF THESE CLASSES. LET'S LOOK AT
US TO SEE EXACTLY WHAT IT IS. SOME "WAR" STORIES TO SEE THE
DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THEM.
SITUATION ACTIVITY
THE FIRST STRUCTURAL
QUESTION ASKS YOU TO AN ACTIVITY OVERALL STORY
CHOOSE YOUR OVERALL MANIPULATION
FIXED
ATTITUDE
WOULD EMPHASIZE THE ACTIVITIES OF
STORY THROUGHLINE. WAR, LIKE THE GUNS OF NAVARONE
NAVARONE. WHAT
BRINGS EVERYONE TOGETHER HERE IS A SCHEME
(ACTIVITY) TO BLOW UP A CERTAIN TARGET.
A SITUATION OVERALL STORY WOULD AN OVERALL STORY CENTERED ON AN OVERALL STORY CENTERED ON
DEAL WITH A FIXED STATE OF WAR, FIXED ATTITUDES IS LIKE MANIPULATIONS IS LIKE PATHS
SUCH AS THE GREAT ESCAPE
ESCAPE. PATTON
PATTON. WHERE EVERYONE'S OF GLORY
GLORY. WHERE THE
THESE CHARACTERS ARE IN A INFLEXIBLE AGENDAS CREATE OFFICERS MANIPULATIVE
PRISON CAMP... MORE TROUBLE THAN "TRIAL" LEADS TO INJUSTICE
THE ENEMY. IN THE NAME OF JUSTICE.
ACT
IVI
FIXED
TY
ATTITUDE
MANIPULAT
WHICH KIND FIRST, IRVING'S RUNNING
AROUND ACTING LIKE A
OF PROBLEM BRINGS I DON'T WOMAN,...
ION
YOUR OVERALL CHARACTERS KNOW, I SEE
TOGETHER? THEM ALL. THE CRUISE IS STUCK
IN A HOSTAGE
SITUATION,...
...THERE'S CONFLICTING ATTITUDES "THE OVERALL STORY HAS "THE MAIN CHARACTER IS A NAVY
OVER IRVING'S PEN-NAME, AND THERE'S EVERYONE DEALING WITH SEAL TRYING TO WRITE—A PERSON
THE MANIPULATIONS IRVING'S THE SITUATION OF
WIFE PUTS HIM DEFINED BY HIS ENDEAVOR TO
BEING HELD HOSTAGE ON BECOME A WRITER."
THROUGH. A BOAT."
ALL FOUR,
THAT'S WHAT
I SAID.
THAT WAS
GREAT, PENN.
STORY OF A "SITUATION"
O
TI
IN A SKYSCRAPER.
SI
OVERALL STORY CONCERN
THE NEXT QUESTION ABOUT STRUCTURE THAT MAY WORK IN SIMPLE STORIES, BUT
ASKS: WHAT'S YOUR OVERALL STORY CONCERN? WHAT ABOUT A REAL STORY
LIKE THE VERDICT ?
WHAT'S MOST IMPORTANT TO THE CHARACTERS IN YOUR STORY?
YOUR OVERALL CHARACTERS MAY HAVE DIFFERENT CONCERNS,
BUT THEY WILL
ALL SHARE
THE SAME HOW THINGS
NATURE. PAST PRESENT FUTURE ARE CHANGING
NOW LET'S
START HIKING.
AW, MAN!.
INSIDE
THE PEAK
MARKED
OVERALL STORY ISSUE
"FUTURE..."
WE'RE MUCH CLOSER TO THE PROBLEM NOW.
NEXT WE FACE THE CHOICE OF OVERALL
STORY ISSUE. YOUR PREVIOUS CHOICES HAVE
LED US TO THESE FOUR OPTIONS
WHAT
THE HECK IS
AN "ISSUE?"
EACH
THROUGHLINE HAS A
THEMATIC ARGUMENT. THE
ISSUE IS THAT ARGUMENT'S TOPIC. EVERY THROUGHLINE
HAS ITS OWN ISSUE OR THEME. EXPLORE THE ISSUE
THROUGH DIALOGUE, IMAGES, AND OTHER THEMATIC THE OVERALL
MATERIAL. THE ISSUES OF THE FOUR THROUGHLINES KEEP STORY'S ISSUE
YOUR THEMES TIED TO YOUR STORY'S MEANING. WILL INVOLVE EVERYONE
IN THE STORY...
THAT CHOICE
TAKES US TO THE
LAST OF THE 12
THAT'S
"PRECONCEPTION" ESSENTIAL
ON THE QUESTIONS...
CHART.
OVERALL STORY PROBLEM
"FAILURE" DOESN'T.
YOU MEAN THOSE DRAMATICA DOESN'T SAY HOW
BORING TERMS ARE THE TO FEEL ABOUT THE PROBLEM,
"HEART" OF PENN'S STORY? JUST WHAT IT IS.
SOUNDS GOOD!
CONGRATULATIONS...
...YOU'VE GOT A SINGLE STORYFORM.
NOW THIS GETS FUN.
THAT ANSWER TOOK DRAMATICA
TO A SINGLE STORYFORM, DETAILING
ALL FOUR OF YOUR STORY'S THROUGH-
LINES IN GREAT DEPTH.
IT IS THE
SKELETON OF YOUR
STORY. EACH THROUGHLINE
HAS A CONCERN, ISSUE, PROBLEM,
SOLUTION, SYMPTOM, AND RE-
SPONSE. -- NOW DRAMATICA SHOWS
YOU WHAT THOSE ARE.
...THE MAIN VS. IMPACT THROUGHLINE IS A
CLASH OF FIXED ATTITUDES OVER WHETHER
IT'S O.K. TO BE LIKE A WOMAN, HUH? THAT
FITS. AND THE CONCERN IN IRVING'S
RELATIONSHIP WITH HIS
WIFE/IMPACT CHARACTER...
SO IRVING'S WIFE
WRITE THOSE SHOULD SEE HER COMMITMENT
DESCRIPTIONS INTO TO IRVING AND HIS COMMIT-
MENT TO WRITING AS THE THAT WILL
THE "STORY POINTS" WORK, FOR A
WINDOW. HERE, YOU REASONS WHY THEY HAVE
TO GO ON THE CRUISE. IN HER START.
WRITE SPECIFIC
EXAMPLES OF HOW OPINION, IRVING SHOULD GET
THESE POINTS WILL INTO THE EXPERIENCE OF BEING
IT SAYS MY SEEN AS A WOMAN, SO HE CAN
APPEAR IN YOUR FULFILL HIS COMMITMENTS TO HIS
STORY. IMPACT CHARACTER
ISSUE IS "COMMITMENT." READERS AS THE AUTHOR OF
THAT DESCRIBES THE THEMATIC THEIR "LOVE COLUMN."
IMPACT OF IRVING'S WIFE THAT
WILL HELP CONVINCE IRVING TO
CHANGE, RIGHT?
GREAT,
NOW ALL WE NEED IS
SOME QUIRKY DIALOGUE
LIKE RESERVOIR DOGS
DOGS.
OH YES! VERY
WAIT A MINUTE! MUCH. THOSE ARE
I ONLY COUNT TWO THE OVERALL CHARACTERS
CHARACTERS IN THIS AND THEY CAN MAKE
"STORYFORM." THE MAIN OR BREAK A STORY
AND IMPACT CHARACTERS. AS EASILY AS
WHAT ABOUT ANYTHING
EVERYONE ELSE? ELSE.
DON'T THEY
COUNT?
THE GUARDIAN
THE SIDEKICK ARCHETYPE IS ARCHETYPE IS
FAITHFUL AND SUPPORTIVE -- "CONSCIENCE" AND
LIKE THE DROIDS, C3P0 AND R2D2. "HELP" -- OBI WAN
KENOBI IN STAR
THE SKEPTIC ARCHETYPE WARS
WARS.
REPRESENTS "OPPOSE" AND
"DISBELIEF" LIKE HAN SOLO. ...AND
THE CONTAGONIST REP-
RESENTS "TEMPTATION"
AND "HINDER" --
TAR
DARTH VADER IN STAR
WARS
WARS, WHO DEMON-
STRATES THE TEMPTATION
OF THE "DARK SIDE OF THE
FORCE" AND WHO HINDERS
BOTH THE REBELS AND,
OCCASIONALLY, THE
EMPIRE.
THESE ARE THE FUNCTIONS
PERFORMED IN STORIES
BY THE EIGHT ARCHETYPES.
THEIR CHARACTERISTICS LEAD
TO A COMPLETE EXPLORATION
OF THE OVERALL STORY
THROUGHLINE.
...THESE TWO
WORK WITH IRVING
AND HIS WIFE THE
"GUARDIAN" AS THEY PLOT TO
IN MY STORY, IRVING DEFEAT THE TERRORISTS.
IS THE PROTAGONIST AND THE
TERRORIST LEADER IS THE THE NAY-SAYING AUTHOR-
ANTAGONIST. THE EMOTION ITIES ARE THE SKEPTICS,
CHARACTER IS THIS TOUGH WO- AND THE INEFFECTUAL
MAN IRVING BEFRIENDS AND CAPTAIN OF THE SHIP
THE SIDEKICK IS THAT REPRESENTS
WOMAN'S HAND-MAID. "REASON..."
WHAT IF SOME OF
PENN'S CHARACTERS AREN'T
ARCHETYPAL? PENN ANY CHARACTER
WRITES REAL CHARACTERS, ARCHETYPES
ARE JUST THE WHO IS NOT ARCHETYPAL
YOU KNOW, IS CALLED "COMPLEX."
NOT CARDBOARD SIMPLEST KIND
OF BUILDING COMPLEX CHAR-
CUT-OUTS! ACTERS IS REALLY WHEN
CHARACTERS.
THIS WINDOW BECOMES
MOST USEFUL BECAUSE
IT PREDICTS
RELATIONSHIPS
AS WELL AS
CHARACTERISTICS.
DIAGONALLY OPPOSED
CHARACTERS ARE IN
CONFLICT WITH EACH
OTHER.
SIDE-BY-SIDE CHARACTERS
ARE COMPATIBLE, BECOM-
ING COMPANIONS.
CHARACTERS STACKED
VERTICALLY HAVE
QUALITIES THAT COMPLE-
MENT EACH OTHER, MAKING THESE
A TEAM. RELATIONSHIPS
REMAIN CONSTANT,
ENSURING THAT
CHARACTERS STAY
CONSISTENT
THROUGHOUT THE
STORY.
THEN YOU
O.K. THIS "ILLUSTRATE"
STUFF IS USEFUL, STORY POINTS
BUT HOW DO WE GET FROM DRAMATICA HELPS YOU SUCH AS A MAIN
HERE TO ACTUALLY STRUCTURE YOUR PLOT IN CHARACTER'S
WRITING? PENN DOESN'T STORYFORMING. "ACTIVITY"
NEED ANOTHER DIS- INTO SPECIFIC
TRACTION, HE NEEDS EXAMPLES IN
TO WRITE! YOUR
STORY.
OH DAMIEN!
YOU ADMIT THIS
MIGHT HELP!
JUST OPEN A
TEMPLATE FILE
TO WRITE A
SCREENPLAY,
NOVEL, OR
SHORT STORY.
NOW YOU KNOW
EXACTLY WHAT
YOU WANT TO SAY
AND HOW YOU'RE
GOING TO SAY IT.
ALL THAT'S
LEFT IS TO POLISH
YOUR TREATMENT
INTO A FIRST
DRAFT.
I USED TO JUST HAVE THIS GUY IN A DRESS
FIGHT HIS WAY OFF A SHIP -- NOW HE'S ALSO ON AN
EMOTIONAL JOURNEY. MY MAIN CHARACTER
IS DRIVEN BY HIS NEED TO CONTROL HIS
SELF IMAGE, BUT HIS WIFE SEES
THAT IF HE DOESN'T BECOME ONE WITH
HIS WRITING PERSONA HE WILL LOSE HIS
CHERISHED INTEGRITY. EVERY ACT WILL
STRIP AWAY ANOTHER PIECE OF
HIS VULNERABLE MACHISMO.
I'M THERE,
PENN. I'M CRYIN!
...IT'S ONLY BY
LETTING LOOSE AND REALLY
EMBRACING HIS UNINHIBITED THAT WAS SO TOUCHING,
AND EMOTIONAL SIDE THAT PENN. WHERE'D THIS
HE CAN TAKE OUT THE BAD ...AND THAT'S HOW PASSION COME FROM?
GUYS AND KEEP HIS JOB. IT ENDS. YOU'VE BEEN HIDING
IT. LET'S GET THIS
STORY WRITTEN!
OH, DO
YOU WRITE?
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