Cambridge Checkpoint Final Revision
Cambridge Checkpoint Final Revision
Cambridge Checkpoint Final Revision
Themes :
Becoming lost Challenging threats
Becoming chased Spies
Trapped Isolation
Searching quest School adventure
Nightmare Camping adventure
Secrets Ocean adventure
Organisation:
Write a short opening paragraph and get into the story quickly
Make sure the opening paragraph lets the reader know who the main
characters are and what they are going to do
Let the characters do this for you
Separate paragraphs for each event of the story
Build tension and suspense through each new paragraph up until the
climax and resolution
Use the last paragraph to bring the characters back to normality
perhaps using a dialogue to round off the story and make a comment
''Well , I don't think we'll be going back there in hurry,'' laughed Billy.
Show not tell
Perfect punctuation
Dialogues are important to show characters personality and move the story
along remember 66 99 rule
A new speaker, A new line.
Remember punctuation inside as well as around speech commas question
and exclamation marks
Use an ellipsis at the end of a cliffhanger sentence but not too often.
Super sentences
write in the first or third person
use past tense
use powerful verbs to convey actions thoughts and feelings
use simple sentences to build suspense or make your reader jump
use compound sentences to show actions or reasons
use complex sentences to show the reader who where and when and why
start complex sentences with ed ,ing and ly starters to create rhythm
use punctuation for impact e.g. ''help! ''
Possible Problems
Perfect punctuation
use one or two exclamation marks when something dramatic occurs
New speaker new line using speech marks.
Remember punctuation inside as well as around speech commas
question and exclamation marks
ask your reader a question and use a question mark for one of your
characters
use one or two ellipses to show a cliffhanger but don't overdo them.
Structure: is the basic events of a story and how its plot unfolds. Science-
fiction stories are usually full of action, adventure and plot twists that make up
the structure.
Organisation
As the timing settings may be unusual they need to be revealed early in the
story
Relate events in chronological order or include flashbacks or start with the
problem return to the original setting
Structure
Science fiction usually follows a usual story structure there may be
flashbacks and forwards if time travel is involved.
The time or setting must impact upon the characters and the plot.
The resolution is often good overcoming evil or characters misplaced
in place or time returning home.
Avoid a list of action-packed events this is a story not a cartoon or a
computer game .
Themes
Technology taking over
Aliens on Earth
Space exploration
Time travel
Good triumph over evil signs
Discovering new life forms
Space travel
Utopias and dystopias
Encounters with alien life forms
Possible Problems
Answer a distress call
Be misplaced in time Slip into a parallel place
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Stranded on a planet Life in the future ruled by
Meet visiting aliens machines
Be abducted by aliens Create a new life form
Have an experiment go Invent a machine to give
wrong superpowers to the
Find a new life form character
Perfect Punctuation
Organisation
Open in a fantasy setting and create flashbacks to the real world.
Move between the real world and the fantasy setting.
Write a short opening paragraph and get into the story quickly
Make sure the opening paragraph lets the reader know who the main characters
are and what they are going to do leave the characters do this for you.
Separate paragraphs for each event of the story
Build tension and suspense through each new paragraph up until the climax and
resolution.
Use the last paragraph to bring the characters back to normality or wondering if
life will never be the same again.
Structure
Use narrative structure of opening, build-up, problem resolution and ending
A story told as a series of exciting events in the order in which they happened
building towards the high impact resolution
The story may have several peaks of dramas with the highest point of tension
nearer to the end
know your ending so that the events leading up to it and you avoid including
irrelevant details
Themes
Time travel stories
Different worlds stories
Under seas world stories
Magical worlds stories
Be misplaced in time
Slip into a parallel place
Stranded underground
A quest to beat a sea monster
Meet visiting creatures
Be abducted by aliens
Threats to real world from another world
Being lost in Candyland
Super sentences
write in the first or third person
use past tense
use powerful verbs to convey actions thoughts and feelings
use simple sentences to build suspense or make your reader jump
use compound sentences to show actions or reasons
use complex sentences to show the reader who where and when and why
start complex sentences with ed ,ing and ly starters to create rhythm
use punctuation for impact e.g. ''help! ''
Perfect punctuation
Dialogues are important to show characters personality and move the story along
remember 66 99 rule
A new speaker, A new line.
Remember punctuation inside as well as around speech commas question and
exclamation marks
Use an ellipsis at the end of a cliffhanger sentence but not too often.
Unlike fantasy or science fiction, realistic fiction features normal people and normal places
- there are no fire-breathing dragons or adventures alongside aliens in outer space.
Instead, realistic fiction focuses on conflicts and problems that any person might face in
their life. For example, it might be about losing old friends and making new ones, moving to
a new and unfamiliar place or winning a sports competition. Whatever the story's about, it
shows our world and our society.
Why do we write realistic fiction ?
The purpose of a fantasy story is:
To entertain the reader and fire the imagination
The story takes place in the present or in the recent past (if it's set
Setting further in the past, then it's historical fiction).
The characters live in places that could be or are real.
The characters seem like real people.
Characters
They behave and speak in a way that makes them appear to be real.
Events The events that unfold are events that might happen in real life.
The problems that the characters face are realistic and something that
Problem people struggle with in real life.
For example, moving to a new place, growing up, making friends.
The solution to fix the characters' problems are believable and rooted
Solution in the characters' actions.
They don't just have a magic spell to wish it all away.
The themes make the reader think about things that they face in
Themes
everyday life.
Super sentences
write in the first or third person
use past tense
use relative pronouns
use powerful verbs to convey actions thoughts and feelings
use simple sentences to build suspense or make your reader jump
use compound sentences to show actions or reasons
use complex sentences to show the reader who where and when and why
start complex sentences with ed ,ing and ly starters to create rhythm
use punctuation for impact e.g. ''help! ''
Perfect punctuation
Dialogues are important to show characters personality and move the story along
remember 66 99 rule
A new speaker, A new line.
Remember punctuation inside as well as around speech commas question and exclamation
marks
Use an ellipsis at the end of a cliffhanger sentence but not too often.
A play script is a piece of writing written for the stage. Your child will learn the following
facts about the play scripts they read, write and perform:
A play script will include a list of characters (at the very beginning).
It may be divided into acts which are then divided into scenes.
Each scene will have a description of the setting at the start and then the characters'
dialogue.
Dialogue is set out with the character's name on the left, then a colon then the dialogue
Stage directions for the actors are written every now and again in italics and brackets.
For example:
Audience
Someone who wants to know all about the issue and understand the different points of
view.
someone who might want help in making up their own mind about an issue
Typical topics
Should children be allowed to watch whatever they want on television?
Homework! Is there life after school ?
Should pupils have to wear school uniform?
Zoos! Good or bad for animals ?
Should animals be made to perform in circuses?
Chips with everything! Yes or no ?
Should mobile phones be banned in schools ?
Should fox hunting be banned?
Should whale hunting be banned?
Should children be allowed to choose their own books?
Does the village need a by-pass ?
Should children walk to school?
Should bullies be punished or helped?
Key ingredients
An introduction stating the argument
Arguments for and against with support supporting evidence and examples
A summary and conclusion
Logical connectives
Complex sentences
Present tense
Balance all points of view
Perfect punctuation
use question marks for titles written as questions
use exclamation marks for impact
Remember to use commas to separate clauses
Audience
Readers you wish to persuade to buy your product or believe in your course
Typical topics
Healthy eating
stop smoking
the exercising
Persuading your teacher to reduce homework
Persuading your teacher to abandon school uniform
Persuading your teacher to allow football in the playground
Persuading your teacher to allow mobile phones in school
Advertising posters on radio jungles for products or attractions
save our pork
Save our school
Save our woodland
Joining your club
Reading a particular book
Persuading a friend to watch a film or tv program you have really enjoyed
persuading a historical figure to change a course of action
Persuading children not to bully
Key ingredients
An opening statement of the case
Present simple
logical connectives
techniques to attract and engage
Evidence and examples
Persuasive language
Powerful reasons and benefits
A closing statement to reinforce the case
Perfect punctuation
Use question marks at the end of the questions sentence
Use exclamation marks at the end of sentences that attract the reader's attention
Use bullet points to list facilities or benefits
Use a colon after the list title
1- Personal Recounts
In personal recounts, the writer retells personal activities and experiences.
Personal recounts include biographies and diaries.
Historical Recount
News Report
Biography
Autobiography
Story Retell
Scientific Experiment
Diaries
Letters
Newspaper Articles
2- Opening Paragraph
The opening paragraph acts as an introduction. It should provide a setting and a
background for the reader; include who, what, when, where and why,
orientation.
3- Body of paragraphs
The body of paragraphs is a series of paragraphs about the events that you are
describing.
4- Chronological Order
The events in recounts are structured and organised in a chronological order.
Chronological order means that the given events are organised in the order in
which they occurred.
This feature makes it easier to the audience to read and follow the progress of
events.
5- Conclusion
The conclusion simply sums up your text and gives some concluding comments
about the events.
You could include how you felt and what you thought about what happened in
your text. (In personal recounts)
Recounts shall be rich with a range of adjectives, adverbs, and verbs to help the
audience to imagine and comprehend the events.
Adverbs, for example: He yelled loudly in the classroom.
Adverbial phrases, for example: He yelled in a loud, angry voice in the
classroom.
Adjectives, for example: He was a very sad person.
Adjectival phrases, for example: The girls from Year 4 won the school
prize
This gives the reader an idea of what the text will be about. The title
should be written to grab the reader's attention.
2-Opening Paragraph
3-Body of paragraphs
The body of paragraphs is a series of paragraphs about the events that
you are describing.
4-Chronological Order
The events in recounts are structured and organised in a chronological
order.
Chronological order means that the given events are organised in the
order in which they occurred.
This feature makes it easier to the audience to read and follow the
progress of events.
5-Conclusion
The conclusion simply sums up your text and gives some concluding
comments about the events.
You could include how you felt and what you thought about what
happened in your text. (In personal recounts)
1. Headline
Newspapers use the headline to try to grab the reader’s attention.
2. A sub-headline
A subheading is text placed under a headline, often with a smaller
font, which expands on what the headline says, so we can say it is a
smaller, secondary headline that usually elaborates on the main
headline above it. It adds information about the headline or
separates sections of an article.
3. A by-line
Past Tense
Newspaper articles are normally an example of a recount text. They are
written in the past tense as the event has already taken place.
Newspaper Reports
Purpose Audience
To inform Readers who are interested in news.
Rhetorical questions
Do you think that . . ?
Don’t you think that . .?
Isn’t it time to . . ?
Have you ever thought about . . ?
Why not . . ?
Need a . .?
Need to . . ?
Fancy . . . ?
Fed up with . . . ?
Bored by . . . ?
Haven’t you always longed for a . . ?
Thought about . . ?
Worried about . . ?
Persuasive statements
You will be . .
It will . . .
You’ll never need to . . . again.
Just think how . . .
Now you can . . .
For the rest of your life . . .
Useful adjctives
extraordinary
remarkable
amazing
astonishing
incredible
phenomenal
2) Biography
sentencesTime connectives
As a child . . .
During his early life . . .
At a young age . . .
In his early years . . .
As a teenager he . . .
Shortly after this . . .
Soon afterwards . . .
The time came for . . .
By the time he had . . .
Many years later . . .
In 1878, at the age of . . . he . . .
In his later years . . .
Towards the end of his life . . .
In his final years . . .
Other starters
Either by chance or by design . . .
As it happened . . .
Sometimes he . . .
Once he had . . .
What is clear is that . . .
Nobody is sure why . . .
Making statements
One of the interesting things about . . . was . . .
One of the most remarkable facts about . . .
Strangely . . .
Another unusual thing about . . . was . . .
Expressing a viewpoint
In my view . . .
As I see it . . .
I believe that . . .
In many ways . . .
It’s difficult to understand why . . .
Speculating
He might have been . . .
If he hadn’t . . . he would have . . .
Legacy statements
His one regret was that . . .
His dying wish was that . . .
He will probably be best remembered for . . .
His greatest achievement was . . .
He will be remembered most of all for . . .
His life was . . .
His lasting legacy is that . . .
3) Descriptive writing
4) Diary writing
5) Discursive texts
Openings
This piece of writing will . . .
I intend to . . .
My intention is to . . .
I am going to . . .
I will present . . .
I will begin by . . .
To do this I will . . .
Following that I will . . .
Useful phrases
In fact . . .
AsI see it . .
It appears to me . . .
It seems to me that . . .
One argument for this is that . .
I would counter this view because . . .
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On the other hand . . .
It seems plausible to . . .
Therefore . . .
In addition . . .
Moreover . . .
Furthermore . . .
Nevertheless . . .
Subsequently . . .
Consequently . . .
However . . .
In point of fact . . .
It is precisely because . . .
The evidence I would use to support this is . . .
Naturally . . .
Doubtless . . .
It is surprising that . . .
It surprises me that . . .
It is no surprise that . . .
It would seem logical to . . .
Let us now turn to . . .
Let’s consider . . .
An example of this is . . .
My next point concerns . . .
Concluding remarks
In conclusion . . .
It is my conviction that . . .
It is clear that . . .
Finally I would like to add . . .
To sum up . . .
My overall feeling is . . .
On balance . . .
The evidence presented leads me to conclude that . . .
6) Explanatory texts
Opening statements
This article will . . .
The purpose of this article is to . . .
This explanation is intended to . . .
This article is designed to . . .
The following information . . .
I will try to . . .
I will attempt to . . .
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It can be difficult to . . . so . . .
Firstly I will . . .
Following that I intend to . . .
I am going to . . .
The purpose of this explanation is to help . . .
Time connectives
To begin with . . .
Next . . .
After that
Following that . . .
After a while . . .
Wait a moment before . . .
Before long . . .
After a minute . . .
First . . .
First of all . ..
Firstly . . .
Next . . .
After . . .
Afterwards . . .
After that . . .
When . . .
At this point . . .
Lastly . . .
Finally . . .
Subsequently . . .
Causal connectives
So . . .
This causes . . .
As a result . . .
This results in . . .
This leads to . . .
This is because . . .
This was because . . .
Because . . .
Therefore . . .
Furthermore . . .
Opening statements
This article will . . .
The purpose of this article is to . . .
The information presented will . . .
This article is designed to . . .
The following information . . .
I will try to . . .
I will attempt to . . .
It can be difficult to . . . so . . .
Firstly I will . . .
I am going to . . .
Each paragraph . . .
are . . .
is . . .
They are . . .
They are also . . .
They like to . . .
They don’t like . . .
They avoid . . . because . . .
They don’t . . .
It doesn’t . . .
They can . . .
It can . . .
Instead they . . .
In addition, . . .
Usually . . .
Generally . . .
Normally . . .
As a rule . . .
Frequently . . .
They can be . . .
They are usually . . . (It is usually . . .)
They are rarely . . . (It is rarely . . .)
They are never . . . (It is never . . .)
They are a very . . . (It is a very . . . )
Like many . . .
Unlike . . .
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This is a . . .
Although . . .
Even though . . .
Despite . . .
Despite the fact that . . .
Sometimes . . .
Often . . .
Frequently they . . .
Be careful if you . . .
More than half . . .
Less than half . . .
Most . . .
First . . .
First of all . ..
To start with . . .
Firstly . . .
Next . . .
After . . .
Afterwards . . .
After that . . .
When . . .
At this point . . .
Lastly . . .
Finally . . .
9) Invitations
Polite directives
Please come to . . .
It will be . . .
It will take place at . . .
It starts at . . .
It finishes at . . .
I am having a party because . . .
I’m looking forward to . . .
Useful expressions
Please accept my . . .
I hope that . . .
I trust that . . .
It concerns me that . . .
I wonder if you would be kind enough to . . .
I would be grateful if . . .
It would be helpful if . . .
I wonder if . . .
As I see it . . .
I would rather not . . .
I appreciate that . . .
It is for this reason that . . .
Closing remarks
I look forward to hearing from you in due course
An early response would be greatly appreciated
I trust that this is all in order
Thank you once again for . . .
Please do not hesitate to contact me if I can be of any further assistance.
11) Narratives
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Words/phrases signifying the passage of time
Instantly
Immediately
Just at that moment
Before long
So
Presently
Soon
Later
Afterwards
After a while
Much later
At last
In a flash
In next to no time
Within seconds
Next day
The next evening
Eventually
Towards nightfall
At dawn
At dusk
As the sun set
Simultaneously
Finally
Sometimes
Moreover
However
In spite of
Nevertheless
Surprisingly
Strangely
Similarly
Incidentally
Ironically
Despite the fact that
Even though
Whilst
Although
Unusually
In contrast
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Unknown to . . .
Unable to . . .
Without noticing that . . .
Rhetorical questions
Is it any wonder that . . . ?
Don’t you think . . . ?
Isn’t it clear that . . . ?
Isn’t it the case that . . . ?
How can anyone believe this to be true?
Does anyone really believe that . . .?
Evidence of viewpoint
I found it interesting when . . .
My favourite activity was . . .
It was funny when . . .
I liked the part when . . .
I didn’t enjoy . . .
The best part was . . .
The worst part was . . .
I was surprised that . . .
I was pleased that . . .
I didn’t expect that . . .
It was difficult to . . .
Note: remember that these are general answers you just have to
know and understand but not to memorize them as the answers
may vary.
1.Why does the author use imagery ?
To create an image in the reader’s mind and grab the reader's attention
Animal characters
Non-specific countryside setting
Simple moral lesson
There is a crime.
A trail of clues are found.
A satisfying ending
It divides the text into parts, so we can find information easily and quickly.
To tell the reader what is the paragraph will be about.
20-Why the author or the writer used short sentences and sentences fragments?
Example
Something red. Blood. The girl.
(remember that you will not write all of these, you have to pick according to the
text given to you)
21-Why is the paragraph short and not joined to the previous or next paragraph?
This is an exciting part of the story and short paragraph emphasis it.
It shows the change of place/action/new speaker
To emphasise
25-Why does the author write the name of the dog as Bob and not the dog? Why
the author refers to the dog by He and not it?
To make him seem like a person to the reader.
The author makes the passage exciting by using short sentences, short paragraphs,
sentence fragment, imagery or figure of speech./onomatopoeia /word choice.
27- Why are some letters in the middle of the sentences written in a capital form?
DO NOT---------
To emphasise the idea (write which idea from the text given)
To show that------ is essential/important.
To show that the character is shouting or stressing the idea
"Yes," because it makes the reader wonder about what will happen next.
He uses adjectives and phrases to describe the setting and the mood like "------" and "
Because here the object is more important than the subject or it does not matter who
is doing the process.
31. Explain why connectives are used to show time in the text.
32. "finally, we have chocolate!", "then come to us!" give two ways these short
sentences are similar?
33. They also eat krill (tiny shrimpmlike animals), squid, shellfish and
octopus." In this sentence why (tiny shrimp like animals) in brackets?
Because it explains the meaning of the word krill by using a parenthetical clause to add
extra information .
(remember that you will not write all of these, you have to pick according to the text
given to you)
41- When Netta describes the daily routine, she writes : walk. walk. walk...
What does this way of writing tell us about the daily routine?
42. But usually the place was half hidden in mis…..MMMMM ...."
what atmosphere does the writer create with this description?
43. This story is told by a narrator. Give 2 ways the story would be different
if it was written from the point of view of the hero?
44. Their gymslips- a different colour for each house and the school badge -
which she often chewed absent- mindedly (another thing she was told off about) -
Why have dashes and brackets been used in these phrases?
The information and details are emphasised by the dash than the comma.
To make the information stands out.
To highlight the information.
To make the information more visible.
46.The story is told by a narrator, but it is told from …………. (the character) ‘s
point of view.How do we know it is told from …………….. (the character)’s point
of view?
We know what he is thinking.
We know his feelings (and what he wants).
We see everything through his eyes.
47. How would the story be different if it were told by (the character)?
49. Give two ways the story would be different if it was written from the point of
view of …………... (the character)
Change of place
Change of time
New event or action
New speaker
To make him seem like a person to the reader when she gave him people’s ideas
and feelings.
60. How does the writer show amusement/ or that something is amazing/
fantastic?
62.The writer has emphasised the information in this sentence, how can
you tell?
(remember that you will not write all of these, you have to pick according to the text
given to you)
OR:
The words are very descriptive and fun to read (not just 'fun to read').
OR:
Create a picture in my mind and make it easier to understand.
If Text … is ticked:
EITHER:
OR:
it is very factual.
OR:
Note :
Flashback is a technique not a genre
83- Why are the production notes important? Or What is the purpose of
the production notes?
Production notes are written for the production team, to help them understand
what they must do before, during and after each scene.
92-Why did the writer use parenthetic commas? Why did the writer use a
parenthetical expression? Why did the writer use parenthesis?
-To add an extra piece of information that clarifies, explains or adds information
without changing the basic meaning of the sentence.
Examples:
a- Katie doesn't, of course, know her way home. (Commas)
b- She is -by the way- from California. (Dashes) c- You did (no doubt) make
payment with a credit card. (Brackets)
93-How does the writer link the ideas between the first and the second
paragraph?
The year (1912) used at the end of one paragraph is repeated at the start of the
next paragraph. The ideas are linked by time/ chronologically
95-How does the writer connect the narrative of the past with the present?
The writer uses events written out of the chronological order/ uses
flashback/uses memories The writer uses narrative past/past perfect tense
(had...spent/had suggested/had said/had been right) .
Good luck
Dr. Chérihanne Achraf
MA. English Language Arts
Teaching Methodology Techniques
Brighton University.UK