ACADEMIC IELTS WRITING

Instructor: Rajnesh Thapa 9823555180

1. Academic Writing Task 2 - 40 min 250 Words

● 10 min thinking and planning what to write in your essay.
● 30 min to write answer
2. Question Types:
I. Advantage/disadvantage essay or Advantages outweigh disadvantages or positive/negative
II. To what extent do you agree?
III. 100 % Agree/disagree essay
IV. Cause/solution essay
V. Discuss both views 50%/50%
3. Format
Introduction
● General statement – paraphrase the question statement
● Thesis statement – your opinion (direction to your writing)
● Outline the essay - what you are actually writing
Body Paragraph 1 - Advantage/Agree/Disagree/view 1/ Positive
● Topic sentence. Sequential order (firstly, secondly)
● Main idea
● Explain
● Example
● Conclude
Body Paragraph 2 - Disadvantage/Agree/Disagree/view 2/ Negative
● Topic sentence. Sequential order (firstly, secondly)
● Main idea
● Explain
● Example
● Conclude
Conclusion
● To sum up, In my opinion, To conclude……………………………….. Restate your statement with
two points

*Remember the thesis statement in Introduction and Conclusion should be same.

4. Tips And Tricks Writing
● Understand the topic properly and use the format for better score.
● Use linking word and apply proper grammar, synonyms and vocabulary words.
● Use pronoun when only needed, but you can use ‘they, it and their’ for referencing.
● Using ‘e.g., like, etc., and so on should be avoided while giving example. Use words – such as, for
example, for instance, to illustrate, namely, etc.
● Write ‘cannot, is not, are not, will not, did not’ instead of can’t, isn’t, will'nt in both Task 1 & Task 2
● Slang words should be avoided in the writing tasks.
● Idiomatic expressions should also be avoided ("pull someone's leg," "spill the beans," and "something
smells fishy“.
● Don’t make up facts or statistics in order to prove your point.
● Do not use the same words repeatedly.
● The Passive Voice will always make your writing more formal and while writing essays, the writer
can use the present tense also.
● Don’t use bullet points or numbering.
● Generally, for band 8 or 9 complex sentences are required.
5. Linking words
6. Language for suggesting solution

7. Language for result and cause

8. TIP
DON’T WRITE WRITE
1. Also 1. Moreover
2. Anyway 2. Nevertheless
3. I think 3. In my opinion
4. So 4. Therefore
5. And 5. In addition
6. But 6. However

9. Simple sentences to complex sentences:

a) Global warming is a common topic these days.
b) Global warming causes environmental problems.
c) There are tough challenges associated with global warming.
d) Global warming has very serious consequences

Now converting into complex sentences:

One of the most common environmental issues is global warming which causes many serious
environmental problems. Tough challenges are associated with this issue, and its effects have very serious
consequences.
10. Whether ‘fast food’ or ‘junk food’ should be taxed at a higher rate than normal food?
BP1:
Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food companies would pass on these
taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices, which would lead to people being unable to afford junk
food. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven prohibitively expensive for most people. Despite
this, people in many developed countries, where the problem is most acute, can afford price hikes and will
continue to eat high-fat meals.

* The first sentence is the ‘topic sentence’ and makes the main point. It is, therefore, acceptable for this
to be a simple sentence. The second sentence explains the main point and uses the word ‘which’ to link
two simple sentences together to make one complex sentence. The third sentence gives an example and
uses the linking phrase ‘for instance’. The final sentence makes a concession.

11. Conjunction can also be used to make complex sentences:

● Subordinating conjunctions – As soon as, as much as, If then, If when, After, Although, even though,
Etc. Subordinating conjunction is used to connect a dependent clause to an independent clause.
Example: Although the line was long and the wait over two hours, the exhibit was well worth it.
● Relative Clauses - Use relative clauses to give essential or extra information about a person, place, or
thing. This makes our writing more fluent and more coherent. We do this by using relative pronouns
like who, which and that. For example, Air pollution, which is mostly caused by motor vehicles can
cause health problems.
● Using FANBOYS to make complex sentences.

12. Language for writing

● There are many interesting places to visit in the city. For example / for instance, the botanical garden or
the art museum.
● Undoubtedly, the story itself is one of the main attractions.
● Global warming is partly as a result of increasing emissions of greenhouse gasses.
● The decline of the manufacturing industry brought about high unemployment in many countries.
● Increasing pressure to work overtime causes parents to spend less time with their children.
● Drugs for the treatment of AIDS remain unavailable to millions owing to their high cost.
● Globalization [as a result of/has given rise to] a bland ‘pop culture’ followed by young people worldwide.
● For this reason, ______________________________________________________________________
13. Keyword

*It is often said

Rewrite each of these sentences by putting the main verb in the passive.

1 People say that wind power turbines are completely harmless.

It is said that wind power turbines are completely harmless.
2 There are people who argue that solar power will never replace fossil fuels.
_ _ _ __
3 Experts predict that very soon China will be the world’s leading economic and political power.
_ _ _ __ _
4 Many people regard the Internet as a great force for democracy and freedom of speech.
_ _ _ _ _
5 Researchers hope that they will soon find a vaccine for avian flu.
_ _ _ __ _

1. To what extent do you agree?

Answer: It is argued that investment in public service is important for the development of the economy
instead of spending funds on art, theater, and entertainment. I agree with the statement to some context,
while investment on arts, theater, and entertainment are also equally important in today world.

Investment in education sectors leads to empowerment and employment. Allocating public budget for the
development of education facilities result in higher literacy rate in the country. Second, investment in
healthcare also plays a significant factor. With the availability of hospitals in rural and urban areas account
to better diagnosis and treatment services. For instance, investment in other sector such as transport sector,
hydropower sector, military sector, etc. also have significant importance on the country’s economy. Indeed,
most developing countries are more concern on public investment.
In contrary, investment in arts, music and theatre are not a waste of time.
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
………………………………………………

To conclude, I agree that the government should allocate a large part of its budget on primary needs.
However/But in my opinion, arts, music and theatre should also be financed since they also play important
role in people’s development and entertainment.

2. Advantage/disadvantage essay or Advantages outweigh disadvantages or positive/negative or both

views 50%/50%
Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around
the world.
Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Answer: Adaptation of solar energy is the most demanded and popular means of eco-friendly household
energy. The essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy and also provide a conclusion.

The two main advantages of using solar energy are its abundant availability and it does not pollute the
environment. Solar energy power from sun rays is a renewable resource that never goes extinct. It can be used
as a substitute for electricity from solar cells or photovoltaic cells leading to cost-saving for the household.
Second, solar energy results in being environmentally friendly. The burning of fossil fuels such as coal, oil,
and natural gas for producing electricity accounts for significant environmental damage. Therefore, solar
energy system reduces the CO2 proportion in the environment caused by the power plant.

Despite the advantages/ The two disadvantages of solar energy are dependent on weather climate, and
affordability. For acquiring a solar system requires a wide area of space for direct sunlight absorption.
However, in cloudy or rainy seasons, the power from the solar cell cannot be generated. Another drawback
associated with the solar system is affordability. People living in flats and apartments will not have space for
installation which creates inaccessible to solar power. Moreover, the price of solar panels and batteries are
prohibitively expensive for low-income groups. Thus, the development of solar systems is still in the nascent
stage to accumulate all levels of income groups.
In conclusion, the advantages of solar energy systems are important because they mitigate the problem of
global warming. In contrast, the affordability of the installation process should be the primary concern for
manufacturers.

3. Cause and Solution

Answer: In recent years /Anthropogenic activities/action on the world ecosystem is leading to the loss of
biodiversity and the extinction of various species. This essay will examine the causes of the loss of biodiversity
as well as the possible solution to the problem.

The two main causes of loss of biodiversity are pollution in the environment and overexploitation of natural
resources. Pollution contains harmful contaminants that affect the quality of water, air and, soil. In recent years,
pollution has become a global problem. For instance, air pollution from industrialization and automobile
exhaust can alter the climate and also affect the respiratory system. Moreover, the dramatic increase in the
human population demands more use of food resources and land resources. For example, to construct house or
make highways many trees are cut down subsequently, this activity causes deforestation and damages animal
habitats. Indeed, human activities often destroy the local flora and fauna and cause extinction.

The solutions to the problem are creating awareness to the public and protecting natural areas. First, it is to
inform the general public not to overexploit the resources and aware them the damage caused by the
environmental issue. Additionally, the next step in controlling the loss of biodiversity is protecting the forest
and wildlife areas by limiting human activity and strict wildlife regulation. / Furthermore, it is the responsibility
of society/human/public to mitigate the environment concerns.

To conclude/ sum up, humans influence has negative impact on the world's ecosystem. However, we can
significantly control the loss of biodiversity by protecting natural areas and enlightening people as to this
problem.
 4. Agree/Disagree

*It is often said

The teaching of Information Technology (computers) has become a standard part of the curriculum in most
secondary schools. The same is now happening in primary schools, where children as young as six are
learning how to use computers. However, there is a danger that IT skills are being taught at the expense of
more basic skills.

Do you agree or disagree?

Write in 250 words

*Remember that writer can create 2 Or 3 Body Paragraph.

There is not any prescribed format. Thus, in this essay 2 BP example will be include.

*In this essay 2 situation:

Agree – I agree that IT skills are danger whereas other basic skills are important.
Disagree – I disagree that IT skill are more important than basic skills.

*Remember if you agree then in BP 1 & 2 should include agree main point and explanation. OR
If you disagree then in BP 1 & 2 include disagree main point and explanation.

A. Linking Word B. Linking Word

1 First of all 1 for instance
2 Secondly 2 while
3 Instead 3 moreover
4 As a result 4 causing
5 Furthermore 5 despite
6 Finally 6 more importantly

Answer: It is considered that / It is argue that ……………………………………………………………….

I agree that there is a potential danger of IT skills being taught at the expense of more basic skills in primary
education. While incorporating Information Technology (IT) into the curriculum is essential for preparing
students for the digital age but for the early foundation of students basic skills are significant relevant.

First of all, basic skills such as literacy and numeracy are the foundation of a child's educational journey.
Proficiency in reading, writing, and arithmetic determines for effective academic success and communication.
If the focus shifts too heavily towards IT education, there is a risk of neglecting the core competencies that
underpin academic achievement and cognitive abilities. Moreover, a well-rounded education encompasses not
only technical proficiency but also teach essential life skills such as critical thinking, problem-solving, and
effective communication.

On the other side, moral skills, encompasses ethical reasoning, and a commitment to principled behavior. Moral
skills provide individuals with the tools to navigate ethical decision-making which plays a pivotal role in
shaping individuals personality. For instance, individuals with strong moral reasoning can assess the
consequences of their actions and make choices that align with ethical principles. Furthermore, leadership
skills___________________________________________________________________________________
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In conclusion, basic skills are more advantageous because it result in strong literacy base and enables individual
to continually acquire new knowledge and engage with diverse information sources. However, IT education is
also crucial, but it should be integrated thoughtfully to prevent overshadowing basic skills.

4. Advantageous outweigh Disadvantageous

Answer: Paraphrase the question------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.

While acknowledging the drawbacks, the essay will agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

On the positive side, -----------------------------------------------------------------------Write 2 advantages point.

First topic sentences + Main point with explain in complex sentences + Example.
Second topic sentences + Main point with explain in complex sentences + Example.

One drawback of self-driving vehicles will lead to a large employment loss. ---------------------------------------
Write 1 disadvantage but extend your answer. Topic sentences + Main point with explain in complex
sentences + Example.
In conclusion, self-driving vehicles would result in more job losses. I believe this downside can be outweighed
by the positive side by -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Rajnesh Thapa IELTS Instructor
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Email: [email protected]