Persuasive Essay Edited
Persuasive Essay Edited
Persuasive Essay Edited
Beth Kempton
ENGL 1101
Since the beginning of the twenty-first century, social media platforms have become the most
popular influence of everyday lives for millions of people. People use social media as a form of
entertainment, past-time, engagement, and even a way to show what’s going on in their lives. As social
media outlets have grown, many people have become “influencers” and use their large audiences to
persuade others about different ideas, share news, and show off their cool and different lifestyles.
When using social media and following different people’s lives, it can create an unrealistic perception of
Some may say social media is good for society, it easily allows you to communicate and keep up
with what’s going on. However, social media consumes both time and mental energy. In today’s reality,
almost everyone has a phone, even young people. The easiest thing to do on a cellphone is engage with
other people and create social media accounts to scroll through and post on. When using platforms like
Instagram, Snapchat, and TikTok, most of these sites promote influencers and show their pages without
you having to even follow them. When watching different people’s lives behind a screen, it’s easy to fall
into a trap of self-comparison and the need to fit into society’s social standard.
One of the many issues on social media is the filtered pictures that are posted online. Pictures
seem almost perfect, as far as pictures of food, vacations, selfies, etc. Many of these pictures are edited
or even have filters on them but are so commonly posted that it’s become almost a “norm” in society.
This leads to unrealistic perceptions online as many pictures aren’t portraying such true realities. Some
pictures are so well edited or filtered there’s no way to even tell if it’s an actual accurate representation
of what’s being posted. Tara Well, PhD. states in an article that, “Viewing the thin images increased
negative attitudes and body/facial dissatisfaction. Taking and editing the selfie increased both groups’
negative moods and facial dissatisfaction. Further, the time spent editing the selfies predicted the
Social media’s exposure to so many different peoples’ lives and lifestyles often causes
comparison problems to users online. Social media users want to meet the standard of social media,
watching countless people online with their perfect body types, beauty, vacations, etc. Since so many
lives are represented as “flawless” it’s easy to compare ourselves to others whether it be from body
type, or looks, to lifestyles. This can even cause things like eating disorders, or people to follow trends
that aren’t exactly portraying who they really are. Sarah Gabriele, in her Harvard blog, states that, “The
use of social media does appear to be correlated to body image concerns and low-self esteem. A
systematic review published in 2016 highlighted that photo-based activity on social media was linked to
negative body image. In analyzing the roots of negative thoughts, studies have further shown that the
activity of comparing ourselves is really what is detrimental to our own mental health”.
Another common problem with social media is the seek for validation. When posting on social
media, so many people focus on how much attention their posts are getting. Focusing on the number of
likes, comments, shares, views, or followers can become very consuming and even lead to the
questioning of ones self-worth and unrealistic self-perception. According to the Multidisciplinary Digital
Publishing Institute, “An individual’s following and the intensity with which people react to their posts
can impact their mental health. For example, ref. [22] reports that users who update more frequently on
their social media pages tend to receive more feedback in the form of likes and comments. This
feedback is important, as it enhances the self-esteem of post authors. Moreover, ref. [23] observes that
people receiving negative feedback from their social media posts are more susceptible to emotional
distress”. Studies have shown over time what the consequences are of these features.
It is undeniable that social media has negative effects and portrays such unrealistic perceptions
of the world we live in. From filtered pictures, self-comparison, and seeking validations from others, it’s
important we bring the consequences to light. Personally, I have limited myself on social media,
deactivated most of my accounts and I remove what may be harmful to me or my mental health, as far
as society as a whole, it’s important we are showing authenticity and protecting ourselves from the
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Gabriele, Sarah. “The Filter Effect: What Does Comparing Our Bodies on Social Media Do to Our
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Well, Tara. “The Hidden Danger of Online Beauty Filters.” Psychology Today. 25 March 2023
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