Headspace Service Encounter Analysis Report-1
Headspace Service Encounter Analysis Report-1
Headspace Service Encounter Analysis Report-1
Analysis Report
by Stephen Ratcliffe
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Headspace Service Encounter Analysis
Introduction
Consultancy have been engaged to undertake a service encounter analysis on HeadspaE_:.
Headspace is a leading health and fitness app with a focus on meditation and improving sleep.
Headspace's mission is to "improve the health and happiness of the world" (Headspace, 2021). As
part of this mission, Headspace wish to continually improve their service offering and have
engaged XYZ Consultancy to assist Ill
XYZ have undertaken a ful1-service encounter analysis of the Headspace app (the results of
which are provided below). This analysis includes: a review of the existing Headspace
organisation from a services marketing perspective, a service experience analysis, a critique of
the service experience and finally recommendations have been made for improvements to app.
Data sets obtained from both direct and indirect methods were used in the development of the
analysis including individual service encounter reports provided by the XYZ team, a review of
existing online reviews of the app and a customer experience survey prepared by XYZ.
Some key elements of note from the expanded marketing mix shown above are the use of
promotion. Headspace has a prominent place in google searches. Figure 1 below shows the
results for a google search on 'Meditation'. We can see that Headspace occupies the top
categories in paid advertisement. It is also among the top in non-promoted content.
Go gle meditation X
Ad - h1tpsllwww.head51>ece.com/ Y
Services can also be considered as a core product and supplementary services. In the Flower of
Service model, Lovelock split the service offering into the core product and the supplementary
services, which in turn are split into Facilitating services (Billing, Payment, Information and
Order taking) and Enhancing services (Consultation, Hospitality, Safe-keeping and exceptions)
(Lovelock, 1995). Table 2 below shows the various elements of the Flower of Service model as
they relate to the Headspace app .
Core Training and Guidance Specifically, Meditation, Mindfulness, Sleep and Movement
in Wellbeing
Facilitating Billing Via app, subscription
Payment Via Google play, Apple, Paypal credit card,
Information Prior to purchase on the app store, information on pricing,
content and terms and conditions
After purchase, information provided via daily schedule and
settings menu
Order taking Not applicable to this service.
Enhancing Consultation Consultation not present, seems to be a one size fits all app
Hospitality Meditation and exercise guides are the only personnel with
visibility.
Opportunity for direct interaction with staff is limited.
Safe keeping Personal Information,
Financial Information,
Usage data
Exceptions Problem solving -
FAQs, chat function via a Bot, likely elevated to a real person if
needed.
Handling of complaints/suggestions/compliments - Some user
comments have expressed disappointment with the complaints
handling process.
Of note when considering the flower of service model is the near absence of some 'petals'
Enhancing functions of Consultation and Hospitality are very limited. .D,_...,.n.,e be by design.
The Enhancing elements of the flower of servi are often directly tied to the People
element of the expanded marketing mix. The human factor in a service offering can often be a
source of complaints (Levitt, 1981). Headspace may have consciously decided to minimise the
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To assess the Headspace app's service experience, a combination of feedback mechanisms were
utilised. Customer reviews from the Apple App Store (2021) and Google Play (2021) were
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Behavioural Intentions are · metric for exploring a user's likelihood to reuse the service and
recommend it to others. While most in the survey indicated they would be open to recommending
the app to their friends, all were unsure or against renewing their app subscriptions all together.
Some of this negative sentiment was echoed in the online reviews with many disgruntled users
citing crash issues as their reason for discontinuing service. However, many of those who did rate
the app positively highly recommended the app "I've recommended it to friends and family
without hesitation." (Google Play, 2021).
The analysis of the service experience highlights that al though the Headspace app opera tes
within the zone of tolerance (ZoTI, there are several areas that underperform. Te zone of
tolerance
· fers tohe range in which customers perception of a service meets, exceeds, or falls short of
tions, this is limited by what is an adequate and what is a desired level of service
(Yap & Sweeney, 2007). The ZoTfective initial indication of whether the Headspace app
satisfies an individual's expectatiogge experience in relation to areas of the flower of service
as suggested by Yap and Sweeney (2007).
The prevalence of online and digital service platforms ensures that the average user will have a
level ofL:_XP surrounding the facilitating and enhancing services essential to the overall
service expe (Pihlstrom & Brush, 2008). I tis worth mentioning that although the XYZ team
do not have previous experience with meditation and wellbeing mobile services, ex ec
around ease of use, access to a variety of content and the ot a es ills to be "calmer"
are expected (as suggested by Headspace p omotional content). This set of expectations is
supported by the independent reviews (see Appendix 8.1).
Individual past experiences with free apps, and the increasing occurrence of paid subscription
services, suggested that there would be additional benefits to be gained when subscribing to the
service; there is a 14-day trial, before which you must input payment details, and this allows
access to the full catalogue of meditation and mindfulness audio-visual services. Although
prompted to partake, fulfilling the billing and payment petals, the beneficial ability to free] us
some aspects (including a daily set of activities), trial and cancel the l!..<lu.u-"""'!='- o
provides customers with a degree of ct>nsultation and hospitality. The daily schedule aspect
is accompanied by opt-out notifications that encourage users to engage with the
meditation/mindfulness videos which is beneficial for new users or those using the app as a stress
management tool; the notification directs the user directly to the schedule or a suggested
video appropriate for the time of day (i.e., a sleep assistance video in the evening). However,
both the XYZ team and several users expressed disappointment in the limited nature of
free content
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paid service (Google Pay, 2021; Apple, 2021). EIIJ
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categories of the app (Johnson, et al., 2016r.
positive connection between gamification an
health behaviours has been identified (Johnson, et v v
al., 2016). Use of gamification strengthens
Headspace's approach to encouraging individual
engagement.
Within the app, there are search functions and contact options that enable consumers to seek out
specific content and to report issues within the service (most are only accessible within the paid
subscription service). However, several users refer to glitches or functionality issues when Ell
viewing videos within the app and crashes within the service which impacts the perceived value
in engaging in mindfulness practices and working directly counter to the intended benefits of the
service.
5 Recommendations
Based off the critique of Headspace's service model, it is evident that the service meets the
expectations of new and short term users of the application. However, this report has
identified several areas within the service environment that could be improved in order to
increase retention rates and overall customer satisfaction of the service. The benefits of these
recommendations are further substantiated through application of both theoretical and practical
perspectives to provide a holistic understanding of the changes these recommendations
could have on the overall service offering of Headspace.
To reduce this dissonance, XYZ consultancy ., Sleep sounds and bedtime exercises
recommend that Headspace better highlight ., Move Mode for mind and body fitness
This is a relatively inexpensive component to upgrade within the service environment but could
provide a significantly stronger touchpoint for the customer if this information was conveyed in
the form of an animated video. As this touch point appears relatively early in the customer
service experience, it would likely contribute to a higher sign up rate of new users who are
undecided on purchase.
6 Conclusion
In conclusion, XYZ Consultancy were engaged to undertake a service encounter analysis on the
Headspace app. XYZ's service encounter analysis of the Headspace app included:- 1!111
• A review of the existing Headspace organisation from a services marketing perspective,
• A service experience analysis, which includes both internal and external data sources,
namely - Online reviews, Service experience reports undertaken by the XYZ team and a
Consumer survey also prepared by XYZ,
• A critique of the service experience, and finally,
• Recommendations have been made for improvements to app with the aim to further
enhancing the consumer experience.
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User 1 Expectation I had two conflicting expectations prior to using the service. The first was that as the app
was free to use l was expecting to be bombarded with in-app purchases and quite a
limited amount of content being made available for use. I tend to have lower
expectations for apps which are free to download.
The second expectation was based on the popularity of the app. Headspace indicates
that it is the second highest selling fitness app. The user "star" ratings for the app were
also quite high. This indicates that the app is popular and while not a guarantee of
quality, popularity is an indicator which is available prior to use.
Ongoing usage
To explore the app it is of benefit to not just trial the content itself but also other
elements of the app. The first step was the settings menu, shown in the screen shot
below. The first option was account and subscription. Here I was able to cancel my
subscription. The process for this was quite straight forward. In some apps it can be
quite difficult to terminate a subscription. This can be frustrating and was fortunately
not an issue.
The next option reviewed was "My data", here I found that 'personalised ads' and '
email offers about our partners' were switched to YES without my permissions being
sought during the sign up process. I found this to be annoying.
I also had the need to use "Support". There were quite a few options in this area. I
couldn't find what I was after in the FAQ section so I headed to 'contact us' and "chat'. A
bot assistance was available in tl1e chat, rather than a real costumer service employee.
In some instances I have found bots less than helpful, however in this instance was
directed to what I needed quite readily.
Varying platforms
After using the app on my smart phone for a few days, I decided to try some other
platforms. Apple TV and Computer.
The decision to try Apple TV was driven by the "move" content. Headspace has quite a
lot of yoga and other movement content such as workouts. I didn't find it easy to
consume these on my smart phone and decided that a TV (with a bigger screen) would
be more user friendly. I n·ied to install Headspace on my Apple TV but found that it
wasn't supported (see above). For me this was quite a draw back as it meant that a
significant amount of content (which I would potentially be paying for) was not very
usable.
Next I decided to try headspace on my laptop computer. Here I found that the app has
been very focused on smart phones and tablets for its content. As shown in the screen
shot below, the content had not been modified in the slightest for consumption on a
computer or larger screen. While a focus on smart phones and tablets is completely
understandable, it would have been possible to adapt the website with little effort.
Content was also limited on the website, with the yoga and move elements being
unavailable.
Evaluation The app was on the whole quite user friendly and I was happy with the content provided.
There is definitely room for improvement in some areas, as noted above. There are
further questions which require answers. This can't be achieved in a two week trial. How
does the app change/grow over time? ls new content continually added or will content
be repeated? Is content being targeted to beginners at the start of app usage with more
advanced content becoming available as usage continues, or is every user directed to the
same content?
l can foresee that for users who continue past the initial trial, the app would be ofbenefit.
I also imagine that it would take regular and prolonged use to achieve the full benefits.
User 2 Expectation J'd heard of the app before but never used it My understanding is that the app provides
short meditation sessions or games to help relax the body and increase mindfulness.
YouTube ads seemed effective in inducing a sense of curiosity, their distinctively sound
a visual style stood out from other ads.
J've never been one for meditation, though 1 am always open to new. My closest frame
of reference is having participated a single meditation session at a Japanese Buddhist
temple. It will be interesting to see how this app compares to a meditation whereby the
physical world played such a big role in the experience.
I'm a wrestles sleeper, often waking five or more times a night feeling wide awake with
an active brain. If using this app can reduce that impact, I'd be extremely pleased. I'm
not typically an anxious or stressed person, but I do notice my brain constantly working
on the next 'project' or 'task'. I'd be satisfied if the app can at least help me take 10
minutes out of the day to unwind and shut off from the outside world.
Experience Opening the app for the first time, placed you immediately into a breathing
exercise.This provided an instant taste for what was to come, helping to relax the mind
before proceeding to the next section. This was an effective way to hook the audience.
From the outset, I was impressed by the number of options available to customise the
experience. The app prompts you to select goals to provide yourself with direction and
enable the app to better tailor content.
1 was surprised by the variety of content available. Beyond the guided meditation
sessions, there are a range of workouts, podcast style talks, soundscapes, breathing
exercises and motivational videos. Each of these offer sessions targeting different goals
whether it be winding down, thinking clearer, reducing anxiety and more.
To help you stay motivated, Heaclspace has gamifiecl the experience by providing the
ability to view and compare stats with your friends. You can also enable app
notifications to help you stay on track.
The app utilises a simple design aesthetic with mostly flat vector-based graphics.
The colour palette reflects the style of activity and/or time of clay, with soft yellows
and orange for the morning and soft blues and purples for the evening. The
animations played during the activities are equally soothing. continuing the visual
style through smooth subtle movements. The imagery is fun and playful, helping to
convey the relaxed, regenerating tone.
Sounds in the app are vitally important, playing a large role in the experience.
Whether it's voices or the sound of rolling the waves, the audio is high quality.
When played through headphones, it helps create the illusion of stepping into
another world.
The content available for free is quite limited, though you can see all that is available. I
feel there could have been more free content from the outset, or potentially drip fed
slowly as the user increases their usage. The app also continually prompts the user to
sign up with the offer of free 7 days. Although this experience is annoying. it's to be
expected on most 'free' apps these days.
Evaluation One of the potential weaknesses I found is the app is quite dependant on the user's
commitment to the process in general. If you are not open to immersing yourself in the
experiences offered, your inhibitions might prevent you from feeling any potential
benefits. I believe this app provides the best results with longer term commitment. Yet
users may find it hard to commit the time or simply expect instant results leading to
fmstration an abandonment of the app entirely.
User 3 Expectations l am familiar with the company/real world experience due to being a teacher and the
focus on student wellbeing, particularly in the current climate.
l was familiar with the app through ads on social media (YouTube and lnstagram) and
was curious about what was offered in the app-I expected that meditation and
centering activities, along with some access to sleep sounds/videos.
In tenns of personal experience with meditation, I don't typically engage with the
practice. l have one outstanding experience as a teenager (Buddhist meditation at a
temple in Japan) anclhave been taught some techniques during dance/yoga classes.
Experience Upon starting the app, I was greeted by an almost video game welcome sequence with a
"sun" character and a blue background, and a basic breathing exercise. I found this
interesting; immediately connecting calm with a character and the app.
After this, the standard offer for a subscription (monthly/annual). However, was
disappointed by the lack of access to the services unless you subscribe. The offer ofa 14
day free trial is interesting-one of those "accepted" facts about 21 days to form a habit
does come to mind.
I was impressed by the initial layout, the customization of the user experience and the
option to gamify the experience. The layout of the different category of activities made
it easy to navigate through what you were looking for, and the options available in the
search function fhrther deepened the ability for users to customize their experience.
Evaluation Overall, the app appears to be visually appealing and fairly user friendly. However, the
lack of time to play around with the different services without subscribing to the app
limits the interest I have in using it long term. I feel that the lack of free services on the
app would also dissuade casual users, or those that aren't actively seeking a
meditation/calming app.
User4 Expectation I've head of Heads pace before. It seems like a simple tool to de-stress and relax through
video and audio guided classes. I'm not exactly sure what to expect, I think of myself as
a little anxious and I'm not 100% certain how this will help but I'm up to give ita try.
I'm a little hesitant with 'free· apps because they always tum into a subscription it
seems.
Experience When opening the app, l was surprised to be greeted by an orange blob guiding me to
breathe in and breathe out I already feel more relaxed and I haven't even clicked
anything yet. After this, the app takes me to a familiar sign in/up page with multiple
options. After signing up, the se1vice began to tailor its content by qualifying my needs
through questions. After selecting these, l was greeted with a full screen lightbox
encouraging me to sign up for Headspace premium or start a free trial. I initially
dismissed this, however l realised quickly that to experience any of their classes, you
must have a membership.
After signing up for the trial, I gave a few suggested meditation classes a go. Initially I
found the narrators voice a bit annoying, however I realised there was an option to
change your teacher, so that was nice.
The classes were simple and effective. 1 enjoyed listening to them, more-so the audio
guided breathing classes than the videos however. I could see myself using this every
now and then when I have a quiet moment. I felt some of the classes were extremely
basic, but I had just started using the app, so I'd expect them to get more engaging.
The navigation was simple and easy to use, with the blue, orange and yellow colour
scheme giving a calming feeling.
Evaluation Overall I enjoyed using the Headspace app. The experience was user-cena·ic and
although the app required a subscription, 1 didn't feel pressured or stressed by the
thought of it. Perhaps the interactions leading up to asking for the subscription built
enough tnist and engagement that the subscription felt justified.
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paragraphs relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph
that begins with "also" or "in addition" offers a weak transition from the previous point, even
though it may develop a highly interesting and related point.
Comment 1 | Introduction
Just to note your the first team that took this approach of being a consultancy and its great to
see!
Comment 2 | Introduction
Greta work
here is where you could have linked this to the type of processing of the service which
would then help you transfer into the service product/marketing strat
i.e. for note this would be considered a mental stimulus processing app (working on the
mind and changing attitudes way of thinking of consumers)
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Comment 5 | Service Descr
Great use of example to highlight the prominent features of the service that you are
analysing!
was there anything that you found where this is a problem for your service or something in
which they havent seen a problem?
linking of the two sentences here would have helped to resolve this sentence . For example:
A new moment of truth is instigated and designed to create a positive impression of the
brand and change a consumers mind to continue their use of the service.
Substantiation of argument required. You need to ensure when developing your argument
that you are well-informed through theoretical concepts as well as business sources
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Fantastic. Again first team to lay out the flower of service model as you have done! love it!
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Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly
demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your
paragraphs relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph
that begins with "also" or "in addition" offers a weak transition from the previous point, even
though it may develop a highly interesting and related point.
Comment 11 | Evaluation
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Comment 12 | Evaluation
great work
Comment 13 | Evaluation
What would have been good here is to note that you placed the reviews into the dimension
below. I first read thinking you were discussing why you had selected these dimensions and
even noting your expectations pre experience here as opposed to what has been structured
as normally information such as this would have been great to use in your critique of the
service experience.
Comment 14 | Format
throughout this section you are just missing a refence for the definition of the dimension
used
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Support Needed:
A well-written paper will include strong support for its thesis. Support for your thesis should
come from primary (original documents, interviews, and personal experiences) and
secondary (information that has been processed or interpreted by someone else) sources. To
use your support effectively, you must elaborate upon the information, quotations, and
examples taken from your sources and connect them to your thesis. It is also important to
remember to cite the sources of the evidence and support you use in your paper.
Comment 16 | Format
Comment 17
just a reminder for your next assessment there is no need for you to provide definitions of
the theory at all. you application and contextualizing to the object at hand (service under
analysis) is what is needed to showcase your udnerstanding of the concept.
Comment 18 | Critique
so what makes it sit within the zone of tolreance, clarification of this based on the desired,
adequate and expected would have been great
Comment 19 | Critique
what was this level of expectation? was it in line with the
Comment 20 | Understanding
Comment 21 | Critique
Comment 22 | Critique
does this link to any of the gaps model of service quality, why is limited content in a free trial
a negative feature.
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Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly
demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your
paragraphs relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph
that begins with "also" or "in addition" offers a weak transition from the previous point, even
though it may develop a highly interesting and related point.
Comment 23 | Critique
Comment 24 | Format
Comment 25 | Understanding
Comment 26 | Critique
also if you reflect on service quality it has an direct link to the reliability of the service, that is
being compromised here. Which is also linked to Gap 3 of the Gaps model
additionally if you think about perceived risk this represent functional risk that is being
realised
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Comment | Solutio
what was this level of expectation? was it in line with the
Comment | Solutio
great lead into the
Comment 28 | Solutions
It would have been great to see how these recommendations could be prioritized
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demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your
paragraphs relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph
that begins with "also" or "in addition" offers a weak transition from the previous point, even
though it may develop a highly interesting and related point.
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Comment 30 | Solutions
How would this be implemented as part of the service product so this could be in its
promotion and information flow
Comment 31 | Solutions
good justification
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Substantiation
Substantiation of argument required. You need to ensure when developing your argument
that you are well-informed through theoretical concepts as well as business sources
Comment | Conclusio
would have been great to have this in a paragraph as opposed to dot
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Comment 34 | Evaluation
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RUBRIC: ASSESSMENT ITEM
INTRODUCTION High
Distinction
(85-100)
( /1.5)
FAIL (<50)
No introduction provided, or an inappropriate introduction is developed with a
lack of alignment to the proceeding information.
PASS (50-64)
Provides an adequate introduction, illuminating the direction of the SE analysis.
Some errors and omissions of what the analysis entails is evident.
CREDIT (65-74)
Provides a sound introduction, illuminating the direction of the SE analysis. The
introduction is logical and in most instances is consistent with the proceeding
information in the analysis.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Provides a competent introduction, illuminating the direction of the SE analysis.
The introduction is accurate, logical, and consistent with the proceeding
information in the analysis.
HIGH
Provides an excellent introduction that clearly articulates the direction of the SE
DISTINCTION (85-
analysis. The introduction is accurate, logical, and consistent with the proceeding
100)
information in the analysis.
SERVICE DESCR
High
Distinction
(85-100)
Description of the Service Organisation ( /2.5)
EVALUATION
High
Distinction
(85-100)
Service Experience Analysis ( /5)
FAIL (<50)
Demonstrates little or no ability to analyse the SE. No knowledge of the importance
& relevance of service quality tools is included. No service quality instrument
provided in appendix.
PASS (50-64)
Demonstrates an adequate ability to implement a service quality tool and analyse
the SE. Demonstrates adequate knowledge of the importance and relevance of this
tool. Explanation of the importance & relevance of the tool is required. Some
service quality instruments are included.
CREDIT (65-74)
Demonstrates a sound ability to implement an appropriate service quality tool and
analyse the SE. Demonstrates sound knowledge of the importance and relevance
of this tool. Further clarification of the importance & relevance of this tool is
needed. All service quality surveys provided in the appendix of the report.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Demonstrates clear competence to implement an appropriate service quality tool
and analyse the SE. Demonstrates competent knowledge of the importance and
relevance of this tool. In most instances, the discussion is clearly articulated.
Service Quality surveys provided in the appendix of the report.
HIGH
Demonstrates excellence in implementing an appropriate service quality tool and
DISTINCTION (85-
analyse the SE. Demonstrates excellent knowledge of the importance and
100)
relevance of this tool. A skilful and engaging explanation of the importance of
service quality assessments. All completed service quality surveys are provided in
the appendix of the report.
CRITIQUE
High
Distinction
(85-100)
Critique of the service experience ( /6.5)
FAIL (<50)
No critique or an inadequate critique of SE and service quality findings. Limited
detail. No use of secondary materials to support critique.
PASS (50-64)
Provides an adequate critique of most/all aspects of the SE and service quality
findings. Discussion is primarily descriptive. Limited use of secondary sources to
support critique.
CREDIT (65-74)
Provides a sound critique of most/all aspects of the SE and service quality findings.
Elements of description with deeper evaluation in most places. Scholarly
secondary materials used to support critique.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Provides a competent critique of all aspects of the SE and service quality findings.
Deep argument in most places. Multiple scholarly & secondary materials used to
support the critique.
HIGH
Provides an excellent critique of all aspects of the SE & service quality findings.
DISTINCTION (85-
Deep analysis provided in all instances. Multiple, relevant, scholarly secondary
100)
materials used to support the critique.
High
UNDERSTANDING
Distinction
(85-100)
Understanding and analysis ( /4)
FAIL (<50)
No evidence of linking services & relationship marketing theory to the analysis
discussion. Inadequate grasp, and limited use of course terminology.
PASS (50-64)
Services & relationship marketing theory is adequately linked to the analysis
discussion. Limited use of course terminology and/or minor inaccuracies are
evident.
CREDIT (65-74)
Services & relationship marketing theory is linked soundly to the analysis
discussion. The extent and use of course terminology is sound.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Services & relationship marketing theory is competently used and clearly linked to
the analysis discussion. Use of course terminology is extensive and largely correct.
HIGH
DISTINCTION (85-
100)
SOLUTIONS
High
Distinction
(85-100)
Recommendations to Improve SE ( /6.5)
FAIL (<50)
No recommendations provided and/or the recommendations are not informed by
services marketing theory. Significant limitations are apparent.
PASS (50-64)
Demonstrates an adequate ability to propose several recommendations. Limited
evidence of services marketing theory linked to the recommendations.
CREDIT (65-74)
Demonstrates sound competence to propose and discuss a range of actionable
recommendations. In most instances, recommendations are appropriately linked
to services marketing theory.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Demonstrates clear competence to propose and critically discuss a range of
actionable recommendations. Recommendations are clearly supported by services
marketing theory.
HIGH
Demonstrates excellence in proposing and critically discussing actionable
DISTINCTION (85-
recommendations targeted at improving the SDS. Recommendations are
100)
insightful, well justified and are prioritised.
Distinction
CONCLUSION
(75-84)
( /1.5)
Either draws no conclusion or draws an inappropriate conclusion with a lack of
FAIL (<50)
alignment to the preceding information.
Draws an adequate conclusion, reiterating the SE. There is consistency with the
PASS (50-64)
analysis but could be improved. The conclusion attempts to unify the SE analysis.
CREDIT (65-74)
Draws a sound conclusion and reiterates the SE and recommendations. The
conclusion is accurate and consistent with the analysis. The conclusion brings
unity to the SE analysis.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Draws a competent conclusion and clearly reiterates the SE recommendations.
The conclusion is accurate, logical, and consistent with the analysis. The
conclusion unifies the SE analysis successfully.
HIGH
Draws an excellent conclusion and clearly reiterates the SE Strategy and
DISTINCTION (85-
recommendations. The conclusion draws a fully constructive SE analysis.
100)
FORMAT
Distinction
(75-84)
Format, referencing and grammar ( /2.5)
FAIL (<50)
No consistent style or structure. Limited evidence of appropriate APA referencing
in-text and/or no reference list.
PASS (50-64)
The CRM analysis reflects minimal structural flaws. Information has been
organised to convey meaning to the reader. Some in-text referencing errors
evident (no page number/s for direct quotes or similar). A reference list provided;
some references omitted. APA referencing style followed.
CREDIT (65-74)
The SE analysis reflects consistent structure. Information is organised and
sequenced to convey the intended meaning to the reader. Appropriate and
consistent referencing provided with minimal errors. Both in-text referencing and
reference list follow APA Style.
DISTINCTION (75-84)
Analysis is well structured. Information is logically organised and sequenced to
convey the intended meaning to the reader allowing ease of reading. Appropriate
and consistent referencing provided with no errors (APA Style).
HIGH
The SE analysis is very well structured. Information is very well organised and
DISTINCTION (85-
easily accessible to the reader. Appropriate and consistent referencing provided
100)
with no errors (APA Style).