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    This IELTS discussion essay sample answer is estimated at band 9. See comments below the essay for
    advice and tips.

    Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On
    the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more
    important.
    Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

    It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job, while there are
    others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having
    university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in
    business.

    On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are university
    graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people one step ahead of
    others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get in to
    universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant this level of education is
    for people’s future work opportunities.

    On the other hand, having work experience and soft skills, such as leadership skills and other
    interpersonal skills, can also throw the balance in favour of the applicant, according to some. For many
    positions there are an overwhelming number of applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having
    relevant experience in that line of work or having acquired useful soft skills that can be valuable to a

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    company, can put one ahead of the game when applying for a position.

    Finally, in my opinion, whether needing high level education or skills and experience, depends on the
    position being applied for. Take for example law, medicine or teaching, it is impossible to be considered
    for a position without the required educational background. In contrast, in business, it would be more
    important for a candidate to have soft skills and experience in that line of business so they can step into a
    position without further training and be of immediate benefit to the company.

    In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or education
    depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain the necessary skills or
    degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success.

    Comments: This is a a band score 9  essay. It has over 300 words but all sentences are
    relevant, focused and well written. Band score 8.5 and 9 students can attempt long essays
    successfully but students from band 8 to band 6, should aim for around 270 to 290 words.
    Both sides are clearly discussed and the opinion is also clearly given. Linking devices are well
    used.

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