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Allergic to "supercharging" | Positioning → messaging → core website copy for B2B SaaS

Ever tried eating a good carbonara but drenched in last year's gatorade? I haven't, but the B2B SaaS website equivalent of that would look similar to this hero section from Levanta. So many well-intentioned bits: ✅ clear category ✅ clear ICP ✅ clear-ish outcome ✅ clear-ish next step ✅ multiple trust signals ✅ a half-hearted attempt at explaining the logistics ✅ good objection handling that doubles as a lead qualifier But all this goodness ended up being wrapped in: 👄 a random stock photo model ⭐ random unexplained stars 📊 random numbers and stats 🔬 1.337% of the product's UI kinda-sorta shown Design does matter, but not like that.

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Jamshed Kasim

Helping you build your influence and grow your business on Linkedin | I talk about startups, LinkedIn marketing, and personal growth.

2w

First, when I took a look at this hero section, it seemed so nice and neat. But when I saw your breakdown, it made total sense. Interesting observation, 🤏 Pavlo Cherniakov 👍

George Khoshtaria

Helping B2B marketers become better • Worked with $50M+ global brands & startups

2w

That was an insightful breakdown; I hate random stock models that don't resonate with real ICP.

Sahil Patel

CEO @ Spiralyze | Helping B2B SaaS websites convert 30% more in 90 days

2w

The clutter is killing me. And the stock photo of a happy person. ouch.

Ann-Caroline Wever

B2B Conversion Copywriter for SaaS + Tech | Get copy that understands human needs 🧠 So you can boost sales and generate better-fit leads ✅| German & English

2w

Random visuals that don't support the message can be so frustrating 😅 Great breakdown though! Is there something specific you do, so clients know exactly what sort of visual to insert? Asking for a friend haha (that friend is me)

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