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🖼️ A/B Testing Your Copy: The Art of Clarity in Action 🖼️ Selling products online and feeling like your copy is packed but still not converting? Time to channel Theo van Doesburg and A/B test your way to clarity. Like how van Doesburg abstracted complex forms into simple geometric shapes (as seen in this image), A/B testing your copy follows the same principle. Start with the full picture, then systematically refine and test until you get the perfect, conversion-driving message. Let’s break it down: 1️⃣ Version A: The Full Story Your starting point, like the detailed sketch of the cow, includes everything—product descriptions, all the benefits, features, and maybe even some unnecessary fluff. What to test: Headlines: Try simplifying long, feature-heavy headlines into something punchier. Product descriptions: Test a detailed description versus a more concise, benefits-driven one. Features: What happens if you remove some? Focus on the most important. 💡 Action Idea: Does "Our anti-aging serum has 5 active ingredients for radiant skin" outperform "Achieve glowing, youthful skin in 30 days"? 2️⃣ Version B: The Hypothesis Now, let’s create a hypothesis. What if your customers just need the key benefits? Like van Doesburg simplifying the cow into its basic forms, cut out the fluff. 💄 Let’s say we have a wellness brand. If you’re selling skincare or supplements, maybe your original copy is too feature-heavy or clinical. Test a hypothesis that focuses on emotional benefits—how the product makes customers feel. What to test: Tone: Test switching from a technical tone to something more personal and relatable. Formatting: Replace long paragraphs with bullet points that highlight key benefits. Emotional appeal: Test a feature-based description against a benefit-focused one that speaks to customer pain points. 💡 Action Idea: Try “Rejuvenates skin with natural extracts” vs. “Feel younger and more confident every morning.” 3️⃣ Refine for Clarity Just like van Doesburg refining his sketch into a geometric form, each test brings you closer to the most effective message. By now, you’re focusing only on what your audience needs to hear. What to test: CTAs: A/B test action-oriented CTAs like “Shop Now” vs. benefit-driven ones like “Get Glowing Skin Today.” Urgency: Add urgency with phrases like “Limited Time Offer” and test if it improves conversions. Testimonials: Test if adding customer testimonials or social proof boosts trust and leads to more clicks. 💡 Action Idea: Test “Order now for free shipping” vs. “Start your skin transformation today.” 💰 Great copy is about saying more with less. A/B testing helps you strip away the clutter and focus on the words that convert, just like De Stijl artists believed simplicity led to clarity. 👉 What’s the one message your copy should focus on? Start testing that hypothesis today and watch your conversions grow!

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