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Principal Owner at two X consulting Mentor, Start-Up Ventures, Business Plans & Pitch Decks, Consulting, Business Strategies including Capital Funding

It’s obvious when you use AI

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Helping early stage founders pitch & raise capital.

I reviewed +10 Tory Burch Fellowship applications and 99% used this phrase: “By connecting with a community of like-minded women, I’d not only expand my network but gain invaluable opportunities for collaboration and problem-solving.” 🥴 So what does that mean? The grantor reading applications is numb to the fluffy & non-specific sentences. You didn’t learn anything from the above. 🔥 HOT TAKE: if you can copy/paste a vague sentence into another grant application - ❌ don’t waste your words. ✅ Get specific on what YOU NEED & in WHAT AREAS. So many different industries are applying, so the more specific you can be - the more memorable you will become. Lindsay Housman just won $10,000, Khiara Cureton just won $20,000, Shelley Gupta locked in $90,000 in pitch winnings (and more) with our help in transforming their pitch language. 🙌 Apply to work with us at the link in my bio!

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